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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. cord

    cord Elite Member

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    wow man, im really into these, but lose the wack characters...

    and isnt there already a ''jaze'' on this site?

    i saw his throwup and its better than any of those sketches
     
  2. Jank

    Jank Elite Member

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    seek, ur sketches dont look bad. however, i cant really see thte letters.. they seem to obscured by other shit. that may be wat u wer goin for tho.. i personally would try to make the letters more pronounced and basic.. more like letters.. but wateva floats ur boat... they aint bad..


    toxus gd to u've been gettin the hang of it recently. cos u sucvked pretty bad for quite a while i thort u were going nowhere lol. these days ur producing some shit that aint half bad. and u learnt to colour which u cud never seem to do b4! haha i really like that ^^^ make the H and F are a bit too seperated from the A and R, which possibly overlap too much. also watch how it slants up to the right. gd tho, ur gettin ghtere, thats a nice piece, keep it up
     
  3. Nema!

    Nema! New Member

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    how do i post picks?
     
  4. Seti

    Seti Elite Member

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  5. Seek139

    Seek139 Senior Member

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    their CES ...and i'm more of an artist nowadayz going for a more art look and yes i will lose the karak's
     
  6. Jank

    Jank Elite Member

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    theres like, 10 threads explaining it! have a look!



    fuk it. go to photobucket.com sign up(free) and then upload images to photobuck, and copy and paste the code that appears underneath it
     
  7. Jank

    Jank Elite Member

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    yeah fair play i get that from ur shit. it has that.. arty look. it looks gd, but in terms of quality of graffiti, which relies on solid letters and the way u manipulate them, its not so good. go wit wat u like tho
     
  8. Fosale!

    Fosale! Elite Member

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    ai5.photobucket.com_albums_y158_AlexheartsJennifer_P1010286.jpg

    I just couldn't think of a O to go along with it in Math classCrits/commments or w/e plzz
     
  9. cord

    cord Elite Member

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  10. sky 5

    sky 5 Elite Member

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    dragon, for that style you gotta make sure every line is proportional and the same width also compact or squeeze everything in more so you dont have so much open space on the inside --- nice sketches seek, good overall flow and symmetry
     
  11. Seek139

    Seek139 Senior Member

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    yea but jank who says that you can define graffiti as just letters? i mean i'm just trying to having my own style
     
  12. Bill Cheese of Wheeze

    Bill Cheese of Wheeze Senior Member

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  13. Chop Logic

    Chop Logic Senior Member

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    aimg.photobucket.com_albums_v479_FluxOfPinja_senf1.jpg

    For a battle. Experimented with those little green things inside the letters. Didn't come out as I had hoped but whatever. still learning. Crits/comments/complaints welcome.
     
  14. jerm_mtl

    jerm_mtl Senior Member

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  15. joker00

    joker00 Elite Member

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    ^learn how 2 do 3d better
     
  16. Voze

    Voze Senior Member

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    is it mean to say sect? take off the extension on the left of the e, doesn't look good, keep it simple, looks solid so far, think about where you're putting your extensions so it still looks like the letter, and keep the crazy orange squares out of it so we can see and crit you on what really matters. looks decent
     
  17. [biohazard]

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    Im probably one the newest toys in here, I been practicin this for about a month and these are the only images i got in chronological order. And sorry i aint got no handstyles either but hereee ya goo : aimg.photobucket.com_albums_v155_polishpimp75_graff_20art_smack.jpg aimg.photobucket.com_albums_v155_polishpimp75_graff_20art_SLOWpen.jpg aimg.photobucket.com_albums_v155_polishpimp75_graff_20art_ras.jpg aimg.photobucket.com_albums_v155_polishpimp75_graff_20art_Bongo.jpg aimg.photobucket.com_albums_v155_polishpimp75_graff_20art_rastashroomvv.jpg aimg.photobucket.com_albums_v155_polishpimp75_graff_20art_Picture006.jpg aimg.photobucket.com_albums_v155_polishpimp75_graff_20art_Picture004.jpg aimg.photobucket.com_albums_v155_polishpimp75_graff_20art_Picture005.jpg aimg.photobucket.com_albums_v155_polishpimp75_graff_20art_Picture003.jpg aimg.photobucket.com_albums_v155_polishpimp75_graff_20art_Picture002.jpg aimg.photobucket.com_albums_v155_polishpimp75_graff_20art_Picture007.jpg aimg.photobucket.com_albums_v155_polishpimp75_graff_20art_Picture008.jpg here ya go plzz gimme some good and bad critiques
     
  18. some guy from NCI...

    some guy from NCI... Elite Member

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    BADDD...

    I'm writing echo/eco... so leavve it outttt...... unless you dont live in england.
     
  19. Chop Logic

    Chop Logic Senior Member

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    Go simpler, a lot simpler. Simple block letters.
     
  20. beone

    beone Elite Member

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    please dont bump those^ do some diff shit and post it that is how you will get better

    jerm its a good start to a style loose some extentions and make some of the letters closer


    RAJA finished thinking about adding some bubbles(top) and drips(bottom) both the color of the outline i fucked the tint up because my ruler had black ink on it and it bled into the tint sorry
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    raja
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    karak rajah from alladin
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    peace