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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    ^^^That reminds me of the stuff you see under the microscope.
     
  2. Nicktips

    Nicktips Member

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    Plantcells and chlorophyll?
     
  3. Ghettopicasso

    Ghettopicasso Senior Member

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  4. eido777

    eido777 Senior Member

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    Nice stuff all keep going!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  5. sycophant

    sycophant Senior Member

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    Eido im not trying to be funny but where is the rest of it…somehow i feel something is missing …it looks like you xacto knifed the letters right off the page
     
  6. Nicktips

    Nicktips Member

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    I'm pretty sure that's not the finished product syco, he probably started with the background for some reason. I wonder what it will look like when it's colored.

    Here's a thing
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  7. eido777

    eido777 Senior Member

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    like how the letters are coming together clap.
     
  8. Nicktips

    Nicktips Member

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    nice, looking good, kinda feel like there's something missing though.
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    Here's a small thing I did. Get it.
     
  9. stoke.

    stoke. Senior Member

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    @ghettopicasso, Try wider lines. Your letter estructure needs some work, when i started on that i did stuff like that so..keep doing bro

    @Eido, that background and the flames are cool, but i think they dont match very well with the piece colors, and also i cant read eido anywhere. And i think the piece is to big to that canvas.
    @nicktips, i prefer some letters with 3D,but yea
     
  10. Pinthetailon

    Pinthetailon Member

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    ignore the 2nd image i cant delete it

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  11. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    ^^^ What the flying fuck is that?
     
  12. Pinthetailon

    Pinthetailon Member

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    Lmao, sorry! Ok i'll try to ease it and edit out that crap. I feel like an asshole now.
     
  13. jak24

    jak24 Senior Member

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    @Pinthetailon.
    NO, Just don't.
     
  14. loonaii

    loonaii Elite Member

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    This guy turned writing into a science class
     
  15. Pinthetailon

    Pinthetailon Member

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    I was just asking for one damn piece of advice. Is this not the toys forum? I'm actually trying because I want to learn so please try to help me if you're gonna bash on my shit.(I couldnt delete the clusterfuck picture but it meant to be ignored btw no science today)
     
  16. Siro_

    Siro_ Senior Member

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    It's graffiti, not everyones friendly. After all you're talking to criminals. Anyways taking notes is no substitute for practicing and trial and error. I guess it's good to write down shit so you know, but still..

    Also, come back with a piece and people will have an easier time critiquing you
     
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  17. sycophant

    sycophant Senior Member

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    Exchange work for RESP trying to work things out just don't know what to do crits of suggestions kool

    RESP4.jpg RESP6.jpg RESP1.jpg RESP3.jpg RESP5.jpg RESP2.jpg
     
  18. Mits

    Mits Senior Member

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    Before trying to do pieces you need to practice some tags and keyboard letters. You need to keep it clean until you understand how to use style because all of that was wonky as fuuuuck
     
  19. Pinthetailon

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    Just sayin, if you guys want to bash on my stuff please add crit, or at peast say you cant like bugs and loon pretty much did. Its forum common knowledge. Im not mad at them calling out a hot shit stain on their monitors.



    Ok, I wasnt focusing on styles because I was thinking that in order to create styles I need to know how to Join the letters stylistically. (Lemme know if im wrong) but I'll do this and if I think I see a difference I'll post it up along with something for the community as promised.
     
  20. Nicktips

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    How about you stop talking and post some drawings instead. That might work.