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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. MASTAH_RIBCAGE

    MASTAH_RIBCAGE Moderator

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    zuffyo s115 ??

    do it a thousand times. trying making that Z an R first tho
     
  2. Ruffy

    Ruffy New Member

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    Committed it to muscle memory; gonna be doing this shit in my sleep. How about this:
    My Snapshot5.jpg
    Aside from other problems, the two consecutive F's are a real pain in the ass to try and mesh together without mirroring the first one, got a way around that?
     
  3. MASTAH_RIBCAGE

    MASTAH_RIBCAGE Moderator

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    You need to start using bars. see the tuturial/new to graffiti threads.

    you got a lot of options for your F situation. You can drop an F to make it Rufy. you can drop an f and and an ie to make it rufie. you can do one of the F's upper case and the other a lower case. you can do one f forward and then one f backward, u could make em the same but do that too (mirrored).

    repition helps. using a pen so u can see where your fucking up helps.
     
  4. Ruffy

    Ruffy New Member

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    Righto, thank ya much.
     
  5. miqs

    miqs Member

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    heads.jpg

    tried no extensions
     
  6. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    ^^ Does that say heads?
     
  7. miqs

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  8. Sanguine

    Sanguine Senior Member

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    This still has a bunch of extensions tho. You need to go even simpler and focus like 90% on letter structure right now. Everyone says, "do keyboard letters," but if you're tired of that you could always try sketching other fonts too. Just open up wordpad or some shit and type your name out in a bunch of them, but pay attention to the letter structure. Differences, similarities etc.

    Flick for the chatter:

    ac1.staticflickr.com_1_573_23025097755_8002b95601_c.jpg
     
  9. TheHoly

    TheHoly Senior Member

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    Just looking for some feedback before I add ink
     

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  10. miqs

    miqs Member

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    really just looking for thoughts on the letters cuz i can tell myself that the sig and arrows are poop
     
  11. TheHoly

    TheHoly Senior Member

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    @miqs I fucking love your style but maybe a few too many extentions? I thought the I was jusr and extention for another letter and the m is a bit hard to make out
     
  12. kickiticy2

    kickiticy2 Senior Member

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    that 3d is nice, you kind of lost the effect inside the negitive space tho (btwn letters) but at least u got the vanishing point right

    otherwise your letters are way over your head... bar that shit out and go bigger. flow is almost there but if letters suck none of that matters

    good luck dude
     
  13. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    Miqs: I say try simpler letters. As far as having letters connected it only looks good when it's done right. Me personally I don't like that. Try not doing that and simplify a little. Keep practicing bro and don't give up.

    Holy: The L needs a longer bottom, hard to differentiate between a L or I. The pointy bottom on the Y is not really fitting in with the other letters.
     
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  14. kickiticy2

    kickiticy2 Senior Member

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    miqs 5 mins but doin tons of these or even simpler is where its at for me right now(and its workin imo).

    please krit tho

    IMG_0094.jpg
     
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  15. kickiticy2

    kickiticy2 Senior Member

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  16. miqs

    miqs Member

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    forem i dig it

    pen freesteezy
    mwgsimpler.jpg

    dont look at the b... just dont
    blank.jpg
     
  17. zoup

    zoup Elite Member

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  18. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    ^^Looking cleaner, Zoup.
     
  19. kickiticy2

    kickiticy2 Senior Member

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    miqs the word "get" is ur best therr.. equaheight equaspacing

    the blank is just ugly

    zoup looks pretty cool reminds me of styles u dont see anymore.

    i was baked edit:
    my only comment is the negtive space/3d could bring your middle letters bettr
     
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  20. Edward"Sezer"Hands

    Edward"Sezer"Hands Elite Member

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    forem- space your letters out more they are too on top of eachother. keep at it dude