^^ Does that say heads?

 

yes

 

This still has a bunch of extensions tho. You need to go even simpler and focus like 90% on letter structure right now. Everyone says, "do keyboard letters," but if you're tired of that you could always try sketching other fonts too. Just open up wordpad or some shit and type your name out in a bunch of them, but pay attention to the letter structure. Differences, similarities etc.

Flick for the chatter:

 

Just looking for some feedback before I add ink

 

really just looking for thoughts on the letters cuz i can tell myself that the sig and arrows are poop

 

@miqs I fucking love your style but maybe a few too many extentions? I thought the I was jusr and extention for another letter and the m is a bit hard to make out

 

that 3d is nice, you kind of lost the effect inside the negitive space tho (btwn letters) but at least u got the vanishing point right

otherwise your letters are way over your head... bar that shit out and go bigger. flow is almost there but if letters suck none of that matters

good luck dude

 

Miqs: I say try simpler letters. As far as having letters connected it only looks good when it's done right. Me personally I don't like that. Try not doing that and simplify a little. Keep practicing bro and don't give up.

Holy: The L needs a longer bottom, hard to differentiate between a L or I. The pointy bottom on the Y is not really fitting in with the other letters.

 

miqs 5 mins but doin tons of these or even simpler is where its at for me right now(and its workin imo).

please krit tho

 

forem i dig it

pen freesteezy


dont look at the b... just dont

 

^^Looking cleaner, Zoup.

 

miqs the word "get" is ur best therr.. equaheight equaspacing

the blank is just ugly

zoup looks pretty cool reminds me of styles u dont see anymore.

i was baked edit:
my only comment is the negtive space/3d could bring your middle letters bettr

 

forem- space your letters out more they are too on top of eachother. keep at it dude

 

ight man thanks ill try

 

Hit the simps, daze.

 

I been trying to go rightinto ink. I pump em out quicker and it makes me think it through more but sumtimes i gotta compensate forbad lines

 

Uhhh. I did that for years before I learned you gotta do it right first to do it different eventually. . Once that clickd imo I progressd like crazyy. Think u got it backward dude

U should delete those double posts too. edit button man so u can get rid of double posts and duplicate pics

I dig that star hat character with the hand and burdy thoo. Not my style but cool. Stuff really isnt graff or graff sketches my dude