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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Jeht.1

    Jeht.1 Senior Member

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    Also I was making sure. Because I did do bars.
     
  2. loonaii

    loonaii Elite Member

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    Lmao wtf are u saying man.
     
  3. dangeri

    dangeri Elite Member

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    Loon : LO on last page with cobweb thing is top. Would like to see that finished/full pieced.

    Beshok : As its mentioned above, think you have jumped in at the deep end, simplifying would give it more kick. I also think it would be a lot better without the blue, some of the letters are quite nice, I particularly like the H.

    Jeht : Take the advice pal. Start with keyboard letters and add flavour later. I can see from the roughness of your lines that you struggle for flow when outlining, you should think where it goes,(after enough time drawing/painting it turns to muscle memory so thinking becomes optional). Then do the line in one swift movement.
    Also, and this is my opinion only, but paraphrasing both Banksy and Cope wont win you many friends within the graff community.
     
  4. zoup

    zoup Elite Member

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    @beshok cool style man, i like the letters going skinny to fat lettering, its funky fresh. O looks like U, wasn't feeling that zigzag at the end of the S.
     
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  5. Beshok

    Beshok New Member

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    Thank you all! Gonna improve, I promise! :)
     
  6. Junglizt

    Junglizt Senior Member

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    Don't make promises you can't keep... Just kiddin' brosef good luck

    Piece for the Fiefy battle (dafuk even is that word?)

    fiefy.jpg
     
  7. zoup

    zoup Elite Member

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    Damn that looks tight dude, im still writing it, this word fucken sucks lol.
     
  8. MASTAH_RIBCAGE

    MASTAH_RIBCAGE Moderator

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    extensions are no good my friend^ would look better without em... Fixed in my mind how the Y should look that top left bar (circled in red) Should be a little thinner to accept some more negative space ya know? If you would have put a proper 3d and left out the extensions youd have a real contendor. Im digging the I. And the flow of all the top bars is good till they get to the Y

    ai1282.photobucket.com_albums_a528_reachumups_fiefy_zpsmygbi6kv.jpg
     
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  9. Junglizt

    Junglizt Senior Member

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    @rib - yeah cheers for the crit. I've never been too good at Y's, was going for symmetry with the bottom bar. As for the bump at the bottom of the E I literally toyed with the idea of leaving it our or keeping it for a good minute, decided to keep it for a bit of balance with the bottom of the 2nd F but I see what you mean.. will work on the extensions to. You got an entry in the pipeline?
     
  10. MASTAH_RIBCAGE

    MASTAH_RIBCAGE Moderator

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    that bump on the bottom of the E makes sense. just like it does on the top of the I. But with no 3d, it doesnt really serve a purpose imo. I see the symmetry you were going for too, just wasnt executed well. I tried to match it and only bring that bottom bar of the y down a little more but my mspaint skills arent the best and that part wasnt the focus

    probably not gonna put in an entry. would be a shame for all of you to see that jeht and loon burn me
     
  11. BANKO

    BANKO Senior Member

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    BANKO Senior Member

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  13. BANKO

    BANKO Senior Member

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    Criticism? I know that 3D on the first one is fucked and some of the pictures got flipped
     
  14. eatsoe

    eatsoe Senior Member

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    Banko, I think that shit's fire. You're really making moves with the shit. I don't like your S, but I think that's the most negative criticism I can even give you.
     
  15. Sir_Bad_A_Lot

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    ai68.tinypic.com_11qp8ue.jpg

    trying smthng..dont know..;)
     
  16. BANKO

    BANKO Senior Member

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    Aha goodlookin out eatsoe honestly I don't even like my s I'm trying to step it up on that one
     
  17. eatsoe

    eatsoe Senior Member

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    Some shit I threw into a battle. Fudge. The U is complete shit, I already know. Crit me down?
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  18. SuburbanTurban

    SuburbanTurban Elite Member

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    dude thats dope, i like this style way more then the other stuff you posted in the blackbook section, plus that tag on this oooo shit. as for crits, the U could have been abit more spaved apart from the F so it would be easier recognized as a U, other then that though dude im diggin that style, maybe a background woulda made it pop abit more but yeh nice stuff man keep at it.

    Loon, i didnt forget about the exchange, just havnt been in the drawing mood at all, drew up a loon pen sketch but it was kinda shit so didnt bother posting it, il having something up either this weekend or week

    Jungle, that looks dope but i agree with rib with the Y. keep at it man

    nice banko, the outline could have been cleaner on some of those though

    sirbad alot does that say BRY? the R is kinda off and you need to make your letters/bars more consistent. keep at it
     
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  19. loonaii

    loonaii Elite Member

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    Yea I haven't sketched in a minute but il drop a germs today bruhh. Eats that styles like 100x better than the last stuff u posted
     
  20. dazeyes1

    dazeyes1 Guest