Seizer: That block letter is much better than before. Try this style more often bro... Loon: Somehow, I don't like your lowercase "e". Being lowercase doesn't mean that it must be different in height and weight with the uppercase letters. I mean that all the letters should be in the same size..
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Zoup, why did you post some bars of soap or some shit at first? Also, It looks pretty atrocious.. Just being honest here..
Zoup & Agus. Word, thanks for the crit, I'm gonna play around with that style for a bit longer. Feelin the block look at the moment....
Lmao, its piece of shit, no pun intended. Hella biting Sn1per hard and not doing a very good job, i know it loooks fucking god awful atrocious. I just wanted to do back to back battles, with less talk more pictures.
That tinypic i think, it sometimes changes my pictures to a diffrent picture, dont know why this happens. Word is Piece of Shit. you got it, thats the word. @eats i like honesty, dont ever give me sweet kind nice critz, ill never fucking learn with sweetness. If its straight useless atrocious fucking garbage, let a playa know. Fucking preciated. Also come out and play, word is Piece of Shit.
I should really be at work... Now I wanna do a piece composed entirely of turd bars. It'll be my Piece... Of shit..
Zoup: If you want my honest opinion, I think it looks like you're trying too hard to make your stuff look like graff. Stay simple for now. Which is also advice I could take myself. Just play with some simple letters in your hands and what not, add little things like some slight angling of the letters, or like a slight bend in some of the bars. It's gonna be a super repetitive process and probably a little boring, maybe might even make ya wanna smash your head in, but it'll pay off in the long term.