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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. loonaii

    loonaii Elite Member

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    Everyone on this page needs to do some Simple shit. Looks like your all trying to run without learning to walk. Do shit like this until you understand letter structure

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  2. Flow-->

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  3. Hand-s

    Hand-s Elite Member

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    I always start out with simple bars...what's wrong with my structure? Not arguing, but more just curious where you see something messed up?
     
  4. loonaii

    loonaii Elite Member

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    For you I think your over complicating the letters and losing the actual letter structure and turning them to shapes of that makes sense. Your most structured one is the black and orange ride piece. all the letters kept the basic shape but the Dot on the I is way to big and you messed up trying to make connections work instead of having strong individual letters
     
  5. sakuL

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    Extremely new, but made this a while ago. Im not fully satisfied with this but it says "Spinach" and "N" and "A" are combined.
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  6. zoup

    zoup Elite Member

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    3rd sketch for sars battle, damn i hate the fucking outline on this lol
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  7. loonaii

    loonaii Elite Member

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  8. sakuL

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    Some more random things, MOB , and then i fcked up the "O" so it looks like a "u" on the second one, and the last one says sakul

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  9. Flow-->

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    Loonaii should I keep anything from my experimental piece or should I trash it and just do keyboard letters?
     
  10. loonaii

    loonaii Elite Member

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    Flow I like the T you did and overall the piece is consistent with bar widths and shit but the letters are kinda hard to make out. Maybe simplify it a bit but when in doubt always go back to the basics
     
  11. Flow-->

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    Its supposed to say Stuck and yea I see your point on how the letters are hard to make out.. I need work on the S and the K the most I think. Thanks for the crits though
     
  12. Flow-->

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    Scrap all of that stuff and just do keyboard letters.
     
  13. eatsoe

    eatsoe Senior Member

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    Sakul, stop all of that immediately. Keyboard letters, man. Look at your keyboard and use those. Period.
     
  14. Ralpmet

    Ralpmet Senior Member

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    had a few minutes to do a quick sketch again
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    i know its a bit sloppy, was a bit to hasty and only just started to sketch a bit again
     
  15. eatsoe

    eatsoe Senior Member

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    Hit your outline thicker. That'll make it pop more. The 3d on your P is shot compared to the T. There's nothing really structurally off with your letters, but they do look pretty fugly. Get rid of some of that neg space. Post more.
     
  16. LimpBrain

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    What do you think? Any tips?
     
  17. idkwhattodowithmyhands

    idkwhattodowithmyhands Senior Member

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    im not even into piecing but i can tell you theyre shit

    stop with the long ass shadow for now

    just do your letters with normal shadow

    take at the loon straight letter he posted a page ago. Start with straight letters then work for pieces

    why is there an arrow on that m

    start writting the same word over and over not random words each time
     
  18. Ralpmet

    Ralpmet Senior Member

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    @Limpbrain: The O and Non the top one is a bit to much hidden imo and the M on the bottom one doesnt work for me with those extentions

    Thanks for the tips eatso!
     
  19. LimpBrain

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    Thanks for quick replies, I know i suck with M's, I'll work on straight letters now
     
  20. Hand-s

    Hand-s Elite Member

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    Here's what I have so far for the sars battle....I know.my structure has been off in previously posted pics. How's this one looking? I tend to complicate things but it's kinda turning out pretty cool in my opinion...crits?

    F*ck. Why are my pics always upside down?