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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Ahem

    Ahem Senior Member

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    Thanks man. Is it the crooked right bar on the H? Kinda throws off the flow from the A and left bar, but does go well into the E, so I think I have to commit to the one flow/structure.

    Look to do something diff tonight and revisit this style over the weekend.
     
  2. AMC

    AMC Senior Member

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    overall piece is way too busy, the extensions and arrows don't really make sense for example the one in the h and m. the h honestly looks like it could be a k. as for the color do whatever you want man you gotta experiment and figure out colors yourself there is no secret just practice.
     
  3. Koda01

    Koda01 Senior Member

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    about the fill i would like to see that piece in two different greens, and then the 3d in pink. just my opinion tho, just like amc said, go with whatever you want
     
  4. loonaii

    loonaii Elite Member

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    What's the point of getting your hand held? You won't progress like that. Do your piece then get crits and apply it to your next one.
     
  5. echoV

    echoV Senior Member

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    *get some tracing paper so you can make a copy of your outlined pieces b4 putting color in it in case you wanna scrap the color scheme you start.
    not a 'requirement' but it'll save you the trouble of redrawing it from total scratch
     
  6. PUTS

    PUTS Elite Member

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    @ Ahem Imo i kinda feel like there were too many extensions and little add ons.
     
  7. Bt98

    Bt98 Senior Member

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    I'm with everybody else, too busy
     
  8. Ahem

    Ahem Senior Member

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    Thanks for the crits guys, I agree too busy. I think the chips killed it more than anything, and excessive inline detail.

    Good idea echo, I'll give that a go for sure, and Loon, not hand holding but there is a process to making a piece and it's good to recognize the issue during the process not at the end...that's the BFA talking.
     
  9. R3TCH3D

    R3TCH3D Senior Member

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    Just do simples mad, and work on your bars
     
  10. Ahem

    Ahem Senior Member

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    What's with the map?
     
  11. PUTS

    PUTS Elite Member

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    @mad I'm not going to lie but thats pretty trash, start with simple keyboard letters keyboard letters for your tags too. Get the fundamentals down well before going any further.
     
  12. ..romero..

    ..romero.. Elite Member

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    this all has a very homoerotic feel to it. was that your intention as the artist?


    PUTS your sig is perfect for this.
     
  13. Shol

    Shol New Member

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    What do you guys think?
    It's a struggle to keep the lines consistent and straight they often get all wobbly :/
     
  14. PUTS

    PUTS Elite Member

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    XD your not wrong haha
     
  15. Abesk

    Abesk Senior Member

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    Trade with Ahem. Would have put some colors on that hoe but getting up to get markers would make me want to fucking die with this busted ass leg.
     
  16. Lich

    Lich Senior Member

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    Still messin around with this, trying to figure it out, but it's coming along
     
  17. loonaii

    loonaii Elite Member

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    I like it. Your on the right track keep progressing
     
  18. Ahem

    Ahem Senior Member

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    Been busy Abesk, but i'll get you by the end of the week.

    Just something quick for the night.
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  19. aus

    aus Member

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    I've never actually written 'AUS' before despite my username, however I gave it a go and it didn't turn out to bad. Ignore the "one" aha, pree shit.
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  20. PUTS

    PUTS Elite Member

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    Aus take back what you said about it turning out well lol. Sorry but that's pretty shit bro. Work on getting letter structure down and do keyboard letters and bars and whatnot