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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. aus

    aus Member

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    I did this after learning bars and letter structure I guess I'm shit then.
     
  2. PUTS

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    Do a piece with bars and letter structure and show me.
     
  3. PUTS

    PUTS Elite Member

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    Because i'm pretty sure you don't know what bars and letter structure is with that piece you posted.
     
  4. grossgraff

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    Here are a few out of mine, what you all think?

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  5. ARCOS

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  6. ARCOS

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    What do y'all think
     

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  7. Ahem

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  8. aus

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    I'll PM you something soon kk
     
  9. PUTS

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    New concept boys, what do ya'll think? Crits?

    @Ahem I actually really dig the second piece for some reason, I guess I just like how clean and simple it is.
    @gross I dig the concepts and I like that last piece
    @Acros The C gets lost in the piece and your handstyle needs work.

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  10. PUTS

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    tzu I just saw your stuff and holy hell thats amazing. Why arn't those images loaded anymore tho?
     
  11. ZAHRA1281

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    THX, almost i don't go here.
     
  12. SLEEPEEE

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    i love these they are tight
     
  13. Ahem

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    PUTS - Thanks man. Looked a bit better before I did my outlines..curves throw me off a bit.

    I really like your top piece 'UTA'. Clean with great flow.
    I'm not crazy about the P, feels a bit lack luster and almost like it's drooping. I think the right bar comes down too far. Solid stuff none the less.
     
  14. Koda01

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  15. Ahem

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    Koda - Good colours and fill, but needs an outline for the letters. I'd lose the arrow. And I'm not sure if those were accidental, but the title bits on the top right of the A and bottom of the D. Kinda comes out of nowhere. That being said, your D A look solid, K O could use a l little refinement. Good progress.
     
  16. Koda01

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    thanks man, I was lazy to outline the all thing ahahahah
     
  17. PUTS

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    Thanks Ahem.
     
  18. PUTS

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    Koda
    Take out all the extensions and just bust your ass on getting that letter structure down. I would recommend altering the letter structure first before adding extensions.
     
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  19. Koda01

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    then no progress from your point of view? x/
     
  20. PUTS

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    Koda I'm not saying your not making any progress but just stick with editing letter structure first. Exentions later. I spent a whole year and I still am, practicing straight letters, so you'll get there in time you just need to be patient. Keep practicing bro.