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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Saverflt

    Saverflt Member

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    IMG_0863.jpg tried to outline my tag after fucking up earlier pieces. Crits?
     
  2. PUTS

    PUTS Elite Member

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    Bump this
     
  3. ESONE.

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    Stuck piece:

    - flow of u is getting there, I like that kinda style, but the end bit is to exaggerated
    -t doesn't fit
    Overall- I think the clean bars are working for you, now it's just experimenting with bar width to get flow
     
  4. Koda01

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    cleaner lines would look a lot better.. also, it's kinda weird because the first letters are simple and the last two are kinda complex.. besides that, you barely see the v.
     
  5. SuburbanTurban

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    Looking good grosm, maybe abit too many unnecessary extensions in the second post but it's good to experiment! it's a common learning curve

    Saver I agree with koda

    Puts that's looking nice, just keep making it cleaner and cleaner and experiment too

    Been a minute since I've drawn criticism appreciated..pen sketches so there not the cleanest
    image (1).jpg
    image (2).jpg
     
  6. Bt98

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    Thanks man. I kinda figured there were too many. That's alright though, it'll come with practice. Glad its not too bad. Gonna get some serious practice in after this week (finals and I'm moving=no real time for graff), I'll be sure to keep posting and trying to progress. Your stuffs always fresh man. My only crit is the m on the first one is kinda lost to me, looks like an O and an N. Maybe just me though
     
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  7. lse292

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  8. SuburbanTurban

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    Yehh busy time with priorities lol I tryed looping that one leg of the m over its self sorta but it does look lost lol,
    thanks man
    ^looks cool, fix your letter\bar proprotioning though especially with the top of the g leaning over its self like that, looks off to me. Try throwing a drop shadow or 3D on it next time
     
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  9. PUTS

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    image.jpg
    Thanks all of you for the crits now I have another piece haha
     
  10. lse292

    lse292 Senior Member

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    shadow or 3d, crit plz
     

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  11. "ZOALZ"

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    seems a bit complex in my opinion, try a more simplified version...

    like the octopuses face... hahaaa

    and is that only 6 arms.. does that make it a hexopus
     
  12. "ZOALZ"

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    ayy... that as my hundredth post :cool: <3
     
  13. Bt98

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    I think it would make it a hexapus, that only makes sense
     
  14. lse292

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  15. ESONE.

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    image.jpg 10 min flex on "k"
     
  16. Saverflt

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    Straight letter Crits ?
     
  17. Dean44

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    You got a lot going on in that picture. Size your letters down make the fit the page, cool character idea. and for that grey as a backdrop idea maybe do a quick drop shadow instead, would look better. keep up
     
  18. Dean44

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    That's cool, I worked with simples back in the day. Sake simple letters. they look good. add a drop shadow or a 3d would make it look dope. trace it and try sum things out.
     
  19. PUTS

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    Thanks Alcapwn
     
  20. lse292

    lse292 Senior Member

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    1494724108096551564663.jpg Quick at job, crit plz