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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
tried to outline my tag after fucking up earlier pieces. Crits?
- flow of u is getting there, I like that kinda style, but the end bit is to exaggerated
-t doesn't fit
Overall- I think the clean bars are working for you, now it's just experimenting with bar width to get flow
cleaner lines would look a lot better.. also, it's kinda weird because the first letters are simple and the last two are kinda complex.. besides that, you barely see the v.
Looking good grosm, maybe abit too many unnecessary extensions in the second post but it's good to experiment! it's a common learning curve
Saver I agree with koda
Puts that's looking nice, just keep making it cleaner and cleaner and experiment too
Been a minute since I've drawn criticism appreciated..pen sketches so there not the cleanest
Thanks man. I kinda figured there were too many. That's alright though, it'll come with practice. Glad its not too bad. Gonna get some serious practice in after this week (finals and I'm moving=no real time for graff), I'll be sure to keep posting and trying to progress. Your stuffs always fresh man. My only crit is the m on the first one is kinda lost to me, looks like an O and an N. Maybe just me though
Yehh busy time with priorities lol I tryed looping that one leg of the m over its self sorta but it does look lost lol,
^looks cool, fix your letter\bar proprotioning though especially with the top of the g leaning over its self like that, looks off to me. Try throwing a drop shadow or 3D on it next time
Thanks all of you for the crits now I have another piece haha
shadow or 3d, crit plz
seems a bit complex in my opinion, try a more simplified version...
like the octopuses face... hahaaa
and is that only 6 arms.. does that make it a hexopus
ayy... that as my hundredth post <3
I think it would make it a hexapus, that only makes sense
v2 Crit plz
10 min flex on "k"
Straight letter Crits ?
You got a lot going on in that picture. Size your letters down make the fit the page, cool character idea. and for that grey as a backdrop idea maybe do a quick drop shadow instead, would look better. keep up
That's cool, I worked with simples back in the day. Sake simple letters. they look good. add a drop shadow or a 3d would make it look dope. trace it and try sum things out.
Quick at job, crit plz
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