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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. nZane

    nZane Senior Member

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    Loon you got killer Ls and Ns

    @Ringo: Well done, looks much more better with the round top of the R! Good job!
    @Suic: you are good and steering in the right direction, no doubt! just the S of the Suic pieces i dislike, they are cut in half which makes the whole piece sad :(
     
  2. gears244

    gears244 Senior Member

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    Damn it's been 5 years since I came on this forum, and I haven't been doing any graff but still draw. Was thinking of getting back into it. I still do little characters and stuff like that....something I drew the other day 20170505_155657.jpg
     
  3. MASTAH_RIBCAGE

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  4. SuicOne

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    @gears244 nice piece, not much for the toy section :p
    heres something i did just now DSC_0008.jpg
     
  5. SuicOne

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    i personally thinkn with a background and a good colour combination it would be good, i know it says soic, can change the o for a u pretty easily , i normally thought of soic as a name and tried it out
     
  6. SuicOne

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    ive got mixed replies about the s, some say it gives more style to the piece and others say its complete shit, till i figure out a better "s" ill be sketching it with tha one, feel free to send me some better example of an "s" that fits it and ill be sure to bite it !
     
  7. gears244

    gears244 Senior Member

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    ...ya okay it's been 4 years, anyway, I like it suic, little star over the I is a nice touch
     
  8. SuicOne

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    My mates told me why i drew a pentagram, first one to tell me its a star hahaha, i drew a small star and then a bigger one to see what would fit it better, saw the combination of the two with the right parts filled in would look like a pentagram and was like "hell might aswell make it that, gives it some extra 3d" . Been trying to combine characters with my pieces too, everytime i try it turns to shit to be honest.
     
  9. SuicOne

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    DSC_0018.jpg another sketch i just did

    EDIT: I did a yellow outer outline and thickened the shadow and the regular outline as there where small gaps as shown in the picture, wont take the time to upload it again
     
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  10. nZane

    nZane Senior Member

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    Suic thats fresh =)


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  11. ESONE.

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  12. nZane

    nZane Senior Member

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    sweet bro, although i dont like the bubble fill, gives it a too childish look imo!
     
  13. Abesk

    Abesk Senior Member

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    That Esak fill is super fresh.

    Tear it apart boys:
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  14. PUTS

    PUTS Elite Member

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    Not on a blackbook but w/e. Crits?

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    @suic I think imo the I is missing something. Maybe try adding a dot to the top? It's just a suggestion though.
    @nZane Fill is great!
    @Alcawpn Everything looks pretty dope, I just kind of noticed how all the letters are leaning to the left while the E seems to almost lean to the right. Just work on cleaning stuff up and you should be good.
    @Abesk looks good, I want to see a fill in that.
     
  15. SuicOne

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    @nZane I wont repeat what everyone has told you ;)
    @Alcapwn I like it, dont mind the bubbles too much
    @Abesk The "A" is a little smaller than the other letters, other than that i dig that style a lot
    @PUTS The last "s'' looks further apart, you could make it so it connects its top slope to the "u'', with a second outline it would be fire. As fo the topof the "i" i didnt know what to put, i left it like that, knew too it was missing something
     
  16. ESONE.

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    @puts I like the overall direction it's going. However that r needs some work
     
  17. nZane

    nZane Senior Member

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    yea puts its nice. but you need to get cleaner :D
     
  18. nZane

    nZane Senior Member

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    Now i did the classic bubble-mistake :D

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  19. nZane

    nZane Senior Member

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    the A is barely decypherable, other then that its very good!
     
  20. nZane

    nZane Senior Member

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    dont get me wrong, the flow is clearly there.. just those crossbar messes with my head :D
    Edit: or the second straight bar of the A is way too high.. cant decide which throws it off