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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    New battle is up in the Battle Forum.

    Word is: SUMO. Due: Friday 28th
     
  2. nZane

    nZane Senior Member

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    @Jainz i ment overwatch* or not? now im unsure
     
  3. Jainz13

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    ^yeah i see what you're saying, i actually started from that 'e' i wanted it to look like that, the R kind of hidden is the worst letter i think
     
  4. lse292

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  5. TanZ

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    Not exactly a crit and more of a question: why with the bricks? They seem to distract from the piece.
     
  6. lse292

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    TanZ: I like bricks :) 15006052293471271527673.jpg
     
  7. Kaps2

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    Nice work lse, getting better. And i like the name "Shock" Is there all ready a guy who writes this who is well known?
     
  8. ESONE.

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    Lil Late night concept sketch. utter shit so I figured post it here for my efforts
     
  9. lse292

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  11. loonaii

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    Lol this ***** been posting the same shit for like a year now.
     
  12. Kaps2

    Kaps2 Elite Member

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    Who?
     
  13. TanZ

    TanZ Senior Member

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    Context clues would lead me to believe he was talking about Ise...
     
  14. SuicOne

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    i dont want to get in a beef with anyone, but what you said is a little hypocritical. By the looks of it you yourself haven't evolved your style, if you are painting for 4 years (which I dont doubt) you should be doing better pieces. don't jump on people about things you too are a culprit of...
     
  15. SuicOne

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    Work in progress, looking forward to some of your ideas as far as the circles go
     
  16. Kaps2

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    Look suic, i say again work on your hand style. And tick to straight letters i don't like how your letter go really skinny. And if you look at some of loons work, he can produce some good stuff. Tho i agree you should not bring other artists down. So please just start working on your tags. Because then it will be easier to piece.
     
  17. SuicOne

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    I dont piece anything with tags, it's the worst way to go about it, I will try to make my letters more balanced though
     
  18. SuicOne

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    tell me what you think
     
  19. bugs-one

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    Your U looks like an L, again. C looks bad. The letters being in 2 pieces is not working. Again, work on simple block letters until you get letter structure down.
     
  20. SuicOne

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    I would care about the u looking like an L but it's as irrelevant as noting it. Yeah I guess the c is out of place. I won't post pieces with simple letter structures here, it's simple therefore should be understood after a few months of doing it and not need any more criticisms on it. You see, critiques have to match the context of the subject in matter, I'm trying to approach letters in a different way, something that should have been understood from my previous posts. So it's better if you for example told me where my mistakes where in the c for example...looking at it its too thin, and the lower splited part shouldn't have had so much tilt.
     
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