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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. TanZ

    TanZ Senior Member

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    Might work a little better if you had some parallels with the way the letters are leaning. Right now it kinda looks like somebody gave a second grader some letter stickers and they just slapped them together carelessly.
     
  2. ESONE.

    ESONE. Senior Member

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    Ringo you should give throws a whirl
     
  3. lse292

    lse292 Senior Member

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    @TanZ: I know wat do u mean but i like this. You arek not First who told me that . i Just like... One leter, one direction
     
  4. nZane

    nZane Senior Member

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    Ise those arrows are shit
     
  5. lse292

    lse292 Senior Member

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    Ty 4 crit. How its now 15013551711701158642822.jpg
     
  6. ESONE.

    ESONE. Senior Member

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  7. nZane

    nZane Senior Member

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    ugh bro thats cancer for the eyes... not pleasing at all :/ try maybe some straight letters or just start painting shrooms and stuff w/o the words. Cause really man...
     
  8. Kaps2

    Kaps2 Elite Member

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    Hey Ise, i feel that you are better with ringo. I like you style, but stop adding a bunch of stuff to it. Keep it simple and clean. Good luck!
     
  9. loonaii

    loonaii Elite Member

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    Did a pen sketch and outlined it with a sharpie. Gotta redo that F and figure a way to make it look better. Gonna do a canvas with the word later I think I'l go with something close to this style

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  10. nZane

    nZane Senior Member

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    upp some walls for the puns pls
     
  11. ESONE.

    ESONE. Senior Member

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    @lewn is the first letter a g?
     
  12. BAITS

    BAITS Moderator

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    lookin good @lewn
     
  13. BAITS

    BAITS Moderator

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    20170802_201043.jpg

    fill is a little weak since my markets are running low... fucked the background too

    crits appreciated
     
  14. nomadic.carpenter

    nomadic.carpenter Senior Member

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    any advise?
     

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  15. Jainz13

    Jainz13 Senior Member

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    @BAITS, i think you have too much blank space between the letters, mostly "C" and "R". My favourite are R and S, but i'm not sure about the extension on top of the R. The "E" is kind of ok, but i'm really not feeling the "A", maybe because it's the only lower case you have there

    @nomadic.carpenter, you have too much stuff going on...clean it up a little. I wouldn't use those extensions for now, I dont think your letters are bad, you just need more practice

    btw, this is just my opinion, dont take it too serious
     
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  16. nomadic.carpenter

    nomadic.carpenter Senior Member

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    @Jainz13, thanks for the crit! It's been a while..:confused: definitely need to practice my bars again
     
  17. BAITS

    BAITS Moderator

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    thanks for the crits
    @nomadic.carpenter just clear it up a little and tone down the extensions
     
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  18. nomadic.carpenter

    nomadic.carpenter Senior Member

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    Crits please?

    So I put a little more time and little less ink into this one... thoughts? wish I had a thinner marker for the outline..

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  19. PUTS

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    @BAITS The E is ok, I personally think most of the extensions on the piece are unnecessary. Any writer that knows what they're doing could see past that and would point out the mistakes. Which by the way make sure you keep your bars consistent in width, for example your A,C, and S are the letters that need the most work.

    @Nomadic.carpenter, Just focus on what I've told most people to work on in this thread.. Bars haha. And listen to what everyone else has been telling you and you should be on track.
     
  20. loonaii

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