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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. nomadic.carpenter

    nomadic.carpenter Senior Member

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    Thanks for the feedback @BAITS I always struggle making the bottom of the S round
     
  2. Fizz2

    Fizz2 Member

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    @nomadic.carpenter Will do thanks and that battle piece looks nice...I agree with BAITS the S needs a tiny bit of work..

    @BAITS Thanks I will definitely work on it more trying to do a sketch a day..
     
  3. loonaii

    loonaii Elite Member

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    20170820_102750.png Working on my extensions
     
  4. lse292

    lse292 Senior Member

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    Crit plz
     

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  5. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    ^^ Needs a lot of work. Those weird shaky lines ain't looking too good. Try straight normal lines, will probably look better. Also, what does it say?
     
  6. nomadic.carpenter

    nomadic.carpenter Senior Member

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    @lse292 i think I can see what you're going for and the idea is cool but i think your letter structure needs work
    The S doesn't look like an S, I would get rid of the black blots since they get in the way of the letter structure.
    The way the O is leaning it kind of looks like a D. I would balance out.

    Draw your bars into that sketch and you'll be able to see where the structure doesn't match up.
     
  7. nomadic.carpenter

    nomadic.carpenter Senior Member

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    IMG_1602.JPG Trying something new.. new E as well. Any crits?
     
  8. lse292

    lse292 Senior Member

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    Maybe that way
     

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  9. ESONE.

    ESONE. Senior Member

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    Heres an aggressive somer I swear I posted ages ago but cant find
     

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  10. Carlos rivas

    Carlos rivas New Member

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  11. Carlos rivas

    Carlos rivas New Member

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    Hey guys so I Wana critique I have about 6 to 7 months in graffiti and I don't know if I'm going in the right direction or going to slow so this is the best piece if done so far a bit slopy
     
  12. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    Don't be sensitive, let's get this out the way, it looks like shit. That being said, why are your lines all scratchy, stop doing that. You're trying way to hard. You don't know your basic letter structure yet, so start there. Practice basic block letters or how you kids say, keyboard letters. Same thing with your tag practice simpler letters. When you have all the simple letter structure down you'll be able to start doing crazier shit. As far as how long it will take you and where you should be at now, it's different for everyone. There's guys who say they've been doing this 10 years and they still suck. There's guys who've been doing it a few months and are fuckin' killing shit. Just practice and put in the time if you really wanna do this.
     
  13. D_fect

    D_fect New Member

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    I don't like the e in that it's a different colour to start and its lower case which would be ok if you didn't extend it so much and made the bottom of the main section a bit wider. What do I know I'm a fucking toy
     
  14. D_fect

    D_fect New Member

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    That is fucking dope
     
  15. Fizz2

    Fizz2 Member

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    Thanks.
     
  16. nomadic.carpenter

    nomadic.carpenter Senior Member

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    IMG_1671.JPG I know these letters aren't the best but pretty happy with this as a whole! Finally starting to see some improvement.. crits appreciated!
     
  17. Fizz2

    Fizz2 Member

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    IMG_3185.JPG Haven't been able to sketch in a few days but here is a new piece...crits please
     
  18. nomadic.carpenter

    nomadic.carpenter Senior Member

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    Getting better man, try to get the Spacing even.. also that K looks too straight it kinda looks forced.

    I did a bugs bunny today.. not really feeling my E at all but crits appreciated!
     
  19. Saek.

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    @Fizz2 really good but the bottom of the E is off and there is to much blank space in the middle of the E.
     
  20. Fizz2

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    I noticed both of what you guys said after I posted it and I was looking at it...Thanks for the crits I am working on a concept right now will probably post it tomorrow