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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. MIUNZ

    MIUNZ Senior Member

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    The very firstt one is the best but still not good. Work with it though just add fills, do thicker outlines and cleaner aswell. Honestly just do about 50 or so pieces with those exact letters no extensions or anything and work on the fundamentals
     
  2. TabsOne

    TabsOne Senior Member

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    He steals pencils from walmart, hes a sober guy, who raps on a graffiti thread about how he is sober, but he writes lean.... he must be a confused 12 year old. plus hes surrounded by toys and homos... he needs to find better company
     
  3. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    You said you're 17, why not get a job? Those pencils are like $5.
    Straight up though, I hope you get your shit together. Stop saying dumb shit on here, you're making yourself look bad.

    As far as those extensions, don't ever use them again.
     
  4. ESONE.

    ESONE. Senior Member

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    My scratch @work for the battle. Don't mention the L. I am just uploading it here as loosing the magazine is inevitable

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  5. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    Work on the G, U and L. That's a mean looking H.
     
  6. TabsOne

    TabsOne Senior Member

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    TabsOne Senior Member

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  8. Relzer

    Relzer Senior Member

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    Holy shit Tabs nice!
     
  9. MIUNZ

    MIUNZ Senior Member

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    Tabs u should be in the intermediate or advanced blackbook thread that shits too dope homie.

    Latest pieces. I like the second page, crits ?
    Also need help with my handy any tips ?
    Oh and what marker do u guys use for your highlights ? Im using a shitty gel pen and a fat ass posca lol

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  10. lse292

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  11. MIUNZ

    MIUNZ Senior Member

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    Those smiley faces didnt need to be attached to the letters and that is also the best piece youve posted because those letters are simple. But seriously are u on these forums to get better or u just like annoying people with your shit ?
     
  12. MIUNZ

    MIUNZ Senior Member

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    Well people dont wanna see your stuff unless u listen to their critiques and take note, u seem to just ignore everyone and do ur own shit because u think ur too good.
    Simples only till u get good at simples seriously
     
  13. DUTY

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  14. MIUNZ

    MIUNZ Senior Member

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  15. lse292

    lse292 Senior Member

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  16. BAITS

    BAITS Moderator

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    @lse292 i like it. just watch your bars, like on the extension of the A there.
     
  17. lse292

    lse292 Senior Member

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    1509243075130328780063.jpg another one. Crit plz
     
  18. Sanguine

    Sanguine Senior Member

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    Damn, bombing science is so dead now. It's sad to see.

    @DUTY You need to work on getting more consistent bar widths and trying to clean up your lines. Also, You only stylized the S. If you're gonna try to stylize your letters at this stage (Which maybe you should hold off some until you get keyboard letters down better) then at least stylize the whole piece and not just one letter.

    @lse292 That's a step down from the one above, bud. You need to practice simpler letters to understand their structure better and try to get a grasp on flow. Your bar widths are mostly consistent though, so that's good.

    Flick for chatter. Says GRIM. (idk why it keeps posting two images. I can't even edit it and fix it smfh)

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  19. MIUNZ

    MIUNZ Senior Member

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    Yo thats dope sanguine, what paper u use ? Is it black ordid u color it ?
     
  20. Sanguine

    Sanguine Senior Member

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    It's a white piece of card stock. I just filled the background with a grey touch marker.