Ok 1. No matter what you have it doesn't have to be that blurry.
2.keep your bar width consistent
3.what Dom said what's up with the gap in the a
4.what are those connections. They're weird.

 

people have legit been giving you the same crits for months now, yet you manage to ignore all of it and continue posting the same shit. Why are you even bothering asking anymore if you arnt going to take shit seriously.

 

Probably a bad time to ask based off of prior post...lol. But any crits from above

 

Nah mate, they're decent. I'd say keep doing that stuff, straight letters. Maybe a bit on bars. There's a few so I'm not going to go into The individual pieces

 

Aye skirt whatcha think bout this one

 

Good to see a straight. Some bars are a little off

 

Did this for some fun, all/ any crits please as I'm always looking to improve

 

1.thats so good!
2. I think the 3Ds a bit inconsistent.

 

Tresk
Digital Black Book
Graffiti

 

Thanks, I don't know why but I struggle with shadowing. It looks OK when I sketch it but comes out awful when I put color to it for some reason

 

How do you do it? Like have you ever tried using a vanishing point?

 

Yeah but I still manage to mess it up lol. That's what practice is for lol

 

U should do 3D object studies, even just basic studies and not just letters but abstract shapes makes it easier to add 3d to even the wildest styles

 

Nice colors, good flow

 

Thanks I'm gonna take that advice.

 

U should try adding a second colour to the background. Other than that really good.

 

Some random work I did recently.

 

hi