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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. GBBO

    GBBO Member

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    Probably makes more sense to post here than starting my own thread. Thinking about giving the "A" a broader angle. Hoping to eventually develop this into a wildstyle. Any constructive criticism welcome.

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  2. SUDZi

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    was going to have the feet stick out from underneath the piece but I forgot to compensate for the 3D
     
  3. Saverflt

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    yo, i dig that looks groovy as fuck man , just right foot covers up almost all the "I" which is futher away than the rest of the peices spacing with random extention
     
  4. SUDZi

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    Thanks bro I appreciate the crits
     
  5. Esk.

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    these are all my most recent pieces,each of these were done on 2-3 tabs on acid (definitely recommend) while listening to some jams. Any crits are appreciated.

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  6. KoreOne

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  7. Esk.

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    thanks yo!
     
  8. DoZi

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    Some upcoming pieces. Plz r8 from 1-10 (10 being the best) add some constructive feedback thx.

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  9. zombie_hemp

    zombie_hemp Senior Member

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    This book is done, Figured I'd post recent pages over the past few months

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  10. zombie_hemp

    zombie_hemp Senior Member

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    The "time flies" page, Was done with old Eberhard Faber design markers. the rest were all done with prismacolor markers. bought a set of chartpak markers wich sem only good for fills and or backgrounds if anyone has any tips on what I could be working on letter wise or even coloring wise would be greatly appreciated.

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  11. zombie_hemp

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  12. zombie_hemp

    zombie_hemp Senior Member

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    Dozi, where you from, Looks almost euro style. the first one is colored well, but straight letters and or simple piece styles would work better for you.

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  13. zombie_hemp

    zombie_hemp Senior Member

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    and last but not least. this book is done, onto the next one.

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  14. Elik

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    Dozi: The first sketch has cleanest outlines and looks interesting
    ..me personally I like the 2nd one the most - it has the best letters imo, but it looks like there's the 3D missing in the lower part of the 'z' and the 'k'..nice tag btw))
    Maybe try to add some highlights to your pieces..

    Zombie_hemp: Nice, I'd say that the pink throwie from your first post and the last sketch from your 4th post are the best))
    Focus on bar thickness and doing your outlines more precisely. Sometimes the 3D is added wrong>> 20180517_092833-1-1.jpg
    And maybe try to distinguish the 3D more from the rest of the letters (like by adding some darker/more contrast color to it or by outlining the piece with thicker marker).
    ..hope it helps))
     
  15. Esk.

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    any crits/thoughts on this 'e' ?

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  16. Tresk

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    Tresk one X2 sketch drawing
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  17. Urbanophile-666

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    Solid ass outline
     
  18. MINE2 : C.H.A.P.S. CRU

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    Needs some 3d but otherwise nice style and color scheme. Thumbs up :cool:
     
  19. MINE2 : C.H.A.P.S. CRU

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  20. MINE2 : C.H.A.P.S. CRU

    MINE2 : C.H.A.P.S. CRU Senior Member

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    Not sure what to say on the top e, the extension seems a little too much. The bottom e makes for a sick ass B though, I'm digging it