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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
Switched up the N a bit
Gone: few things. Think that piece would look better if the letters were more the same size and level, it kind of expands and lifts up starting at the B on. Also really a fan of making your outline fit the page. Not like you can't go off the page, but that wouldn't really translate to something you could do on a wall unless you paint the end of the wall. Plus if that outline were on the page you could continue that green cloud like it is on the 1st R, would help the overall look. A little shadow might help where some of the letters overlap. The E into the R needs fixing, not sure what you went for there but it scrunched together instead of looking like where the other letters come together/overlap. For now, pick one direction for your 3d and have all the letters follow that. Your 3d is all over the place. It's also hurting your letters. Look at the 1st R, at the legs. That 3d is more of a black hole, if it were as thin as the top right of that R then the legs of the R would be better defined in your piece instead of getting lost in the hole. Keep working on your letters, the first 3 look like you put more effort in them, the last 2 start to bloat and lose their form.
Zoup- will caution against an inward 3d on that outline. Believe it would look better going maybe right or left. No matter how you do it, I wouldn't go so thick with it on the Y and the G, it takes away from the form of those letters on the top right of the Y and the bottom left of the G. Would suggest tracing that outline and making the Y & G 3ds around 1/2 the size you did and see if it looks a little nicer.
I just drew an LVK peace and a bunny with a mask on and a wraith i will post it pretty soon someone try to draw a bunny wit a mask on
New one coloured
Fairly new to all this... been working on these and would really appreciate any advice/criticism
Good simps . keep doing them . thinkin up your out line . other then that keep doing your thing .
Clean them nails good lawd .
You definitely have SOME background in drawing, it shows, and by the looks of it you got basic letter structure under control. Id say keep experimenting with them letters. progress takes hell of a long time just practice as often as possible.
Looks dope man!! That flat top would be a great place to throw a Character!!
Yer characters will come lol don’t you worry just concentrating on my letters at mo here’s one I just did with a train in rough sketch
Here is it outlined and as pendolino is a train I had to draw it at some point lol
I like the top one isaac
Nice....Love the detail of the Pndo in the train tunnel
dink i wanna see the piece with all the curves on it i do a style like that sometimes
I gotta get my camera so i can post pics
That would be awesome
2nd yeng battle practice, fucced up lining up back of the g
Bombing writer 12 whats good kid .
Been working on these tonight, any advice or critism would be great!
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