I dig your work though you got some mad tight simps-WINTR
Elbow-post some new works man i like seeing the shit

 

heres my last couple days worth ofwork i like them they looko fresher in real life
ima keepdoing it no matter how shitty i am at it i been doing it for years and im still a fucken toy
but if you see my shit irl you just respect tha shit i got mad props in arkansas

 

I want to go to a graffiti convention next time they have one ive never been to one cus i live in the country really i have to drive like an hour just to find any buidings and tag the fuck out of em cus they will never find me in a nother citty

 

I aint done shit lol.
Most of these arw repost . been busy with my babys lol .
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.also wintr your hands fine nice and simple. Maybe work on some one liners or some rounded letters. Start fucking with random lines off the right or left side of the w . top of the t and the kicker on the r . are great places to start adding style to while keeping the rest simple .

 

elbowmack-that purple and green piece is like a stompdown kilaz piece and the gfs piece is nice
dude also you wanna trade some slaps??????

 

I might cant piece but my sticker game is mad-Elbowmack

 

The latest.

 

WINTR-I like how you addded the lines in the corners it makes it look cleaner and nice simple btw its almost perfect are you a girl or boy???I used to write jewel which was kindof a girl name o

 

bruh wtf is coronavirus?????

 

You only want if if you have Lymes disease to go with it

 

Thanks homie. And I'm a dude.

 

Yo zoid I was guessing most of the stuff u were doing was meant to be symmetrical in some way shape or form and I did this last week during my lunch break at work bit random but yea

 

haha zoid is atrippy name you see it an you instantly start thinking offuturama out of nowhere

 

trying to get better flow, any advice?

 

For sure! Thanks a lot my dude. I like that D a lot. That's the letter I struggle the most with. I generally like to keep thing balanced overall. This is tight though.

Here is where my last batch of sketches went

 

Playing with pens

 

That fill is actually killer bro, the letters need work still but that fill is top. there are actually plenty of writers whose letters are average at best but the fill makes up for it if you're able to clean up your letters I see no reason for you not to flourish in graffiti practice simple straights and actually make them look good.
also maybe a better understanding of bars would help or just practicing bars a bit more to have more consistent bar widths

To be honest you've just got to keep doing what you're doing maybe thicker but cleaner lines ??
Also your flow is alright for the style of letters you're doing.
Another tip would be to practice your handstyle, that can always improve flow that's why my flow is average coz my handstyle is trash

 

Thanks man, I absolutely need to practice my bars more. I know it all literally stems from that one issue of just not putting in the time to practice better bars. I've been watching some shit on instagram and youtube and trying to get a better feel for it. The shit that fucks me up is trying to put any add ons or connectors in. I way overthink it then end up just going back to simps and playing around with balance, layout, and width to create style instead. But you are spot on. practice practice

 

I tried to add everything to my pieces when I was starting out to and got shit on plenty by people in these forums so I took a step back started only posting up straights litterally no extensions or add ons for about a year then by that time I was more comfortable and confident about my letter structure that I was able to post on here without needing as much crits and resulting in more positive feedback too