I don’t know if I’m the best the give advise as I’ve still got a lot to learn, but id say try keep your bar width consistent on the D’s! also I’d say the flick up at the top on the first two looks a bit odd, maybe try something a bit more like these? Sorry it’s a bit rough but hopefully you get the idea...
Awesome, thanks dinki! Yeah those 2 first ones were really bad on the D (they are just chisel hands outlined with a micron), I like yours a lot. I think I might play around with those structures you've got going and see if I can find something that sticks. I was mostly just liking the ZOI so I figured I might be getting closer to something. This helps a ton. Cheers!
no worries man! Yeah it’s worth a go, see where it takes you. The only other thing I’d say about them, is the halo on the last one looks a bit too big, maybe try fit it in smaller above the OI?
Been a long time since I was last here! Havent drawn as much recently but I still try to find time for it every now and then
I can see u have a little understanding of bars at least so that’s always a good start just pointing out how I would have changed the bars on the D and K as u can see the legs on your k don’t meet in the middle like they should in this case and the D is a bit too pointy (top pic) so I adjusted it a bit to what I think it should look like Also I think if you thickened the bars it would look a little better as well but that’s just my opinion