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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. gumOnShoe

    gumOnShoe Elite Member

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    What would you know about most of my crits? You joined this month. I've been here since 2008 dude. If anything I'm like this because of all the crits I've given to people usually fall on deaf ears and I see the same people I crit make the same mistakes and it's annoying because they either end up completely giving up, or they stuck stick around and just fuck around doing the same shit. I've seen this happen like a thousand times so I take the direct approach and cut out the sugarcoating. Don't like it? Just ignore me, that's what the majority of the toys on here do when someone more experienced is trying to help anyway.
     
  2. Whtboi

    Whtboi Member

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    Just calling it like I see i man and its not hard to go back and look at what someone has posted. How long you have been on an online forum doesn't mean shit to me. I've was on here and 12oz before, this is just a different account. Never said you didn't have your reasons for being the way you are but even someone who is serious about improving their work is more likely to get offended and not listen when you come off as such a prick right away. There are barely any people on these forums anymore as it is. I will gladly take your criticism and use it to improve, your words are just that...words. You're not gonna hurt my feelings and scare me away with them. However other people maybe respond better to actual criticism, not someone telling them their trash. Even if they are complete garbage.
     
  3. Whtboi

    Whtboi Member

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    Knew that was coming XD
     
  4. zoup

    zoup Elite Member

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    Whtboi ita your choice to take his crits personally. Ibuprofen is a narrssacist. The best writers on here never talk how long theeyre in the game their art shows it. Take ibu crits as an opinion, thats all it is move on and continue sketching. Do you see eba putting you down or any others, no cuase they got shit to do lol. All love ibu.
     
  5. Whtboi

    Whtboi Member

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    Wordd. I do respect his opinion though 100%. The man's throwies and handstyle are straight fire
     
  6. ElbowMacK187

    ElbowMacK187 Elite Member

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    Get em gum ! .
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    .white boi the advice being giveing on 12 right now in the toy forum bye joker its top tear . check it out ! the is saying the same shit gum is just nicer .
    Stickers for satire ecxhange

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  7. ElbowMacK187

    ElbowMacK187 Elite Member

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    So in summary . simples help you pratice your bars . its harder to hide shit when there is no extra so when somthing looks bad you can see it without haveing to comb threw extentions and extras . this makes it easy for us to judge but it also make it easy for you to see what we mean . when we point out things thats are wrong . simple does not mean block so dont get discurraged . you can still have as many rond parts has your letters can handle . and thats what simps show you . you can't have the s square and the a rounded . not saying you did that . just an example . after learning the basics then you can bend letters to flow tilt ketters to fit with letters it shouldnt or even flip a letter for the sake of flow . . there os some video by a youtuber grim he breaks down the basics and why they important . and I my self listen and when back broke all my shit apart and built back up the best thing you could do at this stage ia that . dont be like me and push it off for years cus you sont want to do simples . ! I was like that stuck in a loop for mad long!
     
  8. gumOnShoe

    gumOnShoe Elite Member

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    Lol. Didnt expect to get props from whtboi.
    Oh. I only bring up my time writing to say how much experience I've had with graffiti, meaning ive seen my fair share of things, that's all.
     
  9. DYSKYS$E

    DYSKYS$E Member

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    Elbowmack-dude your satire piece is dope ahfuck keep up the ill shit man i always likeded your shit youo put reall effort into it du you use like gelpens or just ilke bic rollers to outline i miss my old pieces i just realized this so ima start using bic roller pens and shit like that cus it gives youmore control but i like gel pens cus i think they look like digital art but now im just like dude this doesnt even compare to digital art this is just a thin ass shitty outline LMAO
     
  10. DYSKYS$E

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    I just found a o.five milimeter pencil to so now i dont have to go to the dollar tree for those pencils but they have some straight ass pencils that are ike really good for control but at the same time if you step on them theyre gon like all of them that i had are now smashed like a bih i had four now none and i want them back cus they were like professional and had the name graff in them on the pencils pack i was like yes yes i will buy this HOOOLLLY FUUUCKCKCKCKCK
     
  11. SpawnCamp

    SpawnCamp Senior Member

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    Random sketch. No plans but I kinda like the whole space station wall theme. Not enough room to fit the last letter. Probably going to play around with this more, maybe like the 'O' be a corridor or a door or something.
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  12. zoup

    zoup Elite Member

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    Gimik battle practice not entry sry for brown stain nd ignore the bottom one lol.

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  13. gumOnShoe

    gumOnShoe Elite Member

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    Inb4 omlet is a toy comment.

    Haha gogiveamanpenileexcitement.com

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  14. Tuke

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    Maybe ill join the Gimik battle maybe not

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  15. ElbowMacK187

    ElbowMacK187 Elite Member

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    Its all just a gimik

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  16. ElbowMacK187

    ElbowMacK187 Elite Member

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  17. SpawnCamp

    SpawnCamp Senior Member

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    Trying to make simpler moves. just a quick sloppy one at lunch working from home. Gotta practice not losing my outlines once I fill, fucked up the D and maybe could have made the O a little fatter.


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  18. Aristo

    Aristo Senior Member

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    @SpawnCamp Thats cool and all but you should probably put it in the walls section.
     
  19. Aristo

    Aristo Senior Member

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    Been working on an m. It’s not perfect but I kind of like where it’s going

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  20. SpawnCamp

    SpawnCamp Senior Member

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    For sure, I'll continue to be the only person in the walls thread if yall don't want it in here