Deflect all you want but this thread is for crits and your handstyle and faux calligraphy are alright at best. I've seen better shit on a coffee shop chalkboard. If you just want to be told how great you are go post on reddit or whatever.
That "u" needs work. The letter "L" makes a nice little pocket for a letter like "u". Repetitive motions create flow like the bottom part of the "L" matching the bottom part of the "E".