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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
cheers for the crits cezr
ahaha, hood rich. one love brah.
you're alright. I agree with cezr though, your handsteez is impressive.
I ain't shit talking. I'm doing the friendly clowning to knight you into bs.
o alright home boy, we straight. but yea, i kno its wack shit, but im workin at it. holla
Hoodrich is dope, no pun intended, I was going to rag on you for having the name Hoodrich and for writing dope, but you got the right attitude for writing and for BS, Feliks just called you a fag and what not, and you didnt come back saying much more then " i know my shit is wack" and thats good.
yea man. i dunno , i just write cuz i love to and the more i improve, the more i love it. just tryin to get crits. thanks guys
and as for the name HOODRICH, i dont live in no real ghetto ass hood, its kinda a joke.... peace
mayhap bs isn't lost after all eh ao?
yeah hood you got some steez ptential if you take these tips everyone gives and work with it then you got a chance.
I like your handy.
first tip: letters have potential just make all the thickness the same on each letter ex. the e on the top sketch the bottom leg is way to small.
keep all letters same height(for now). thats about it.
p.s. simples are good to start with. best advice i ever got i just repeated to you
attempt at a euro style. the fade is balls.
p.s. critz well appreciated
i hate laptops. I completel erased the nice crit i had for you. Oh well. Here goes:
the gist is
- your fade DOES suck, but at least you know. orange and red and yellow are the hardest to mix i find, green is the easiest. dark and lime. Blend excellently. then in place of the blue, use a nice bright colour, like candy coloured neon pink or some ish. as for the orange background. i suggest instead a diff colour o go with it.
- the background you have works well with your piece, but you have to enlarge the dots on top because if you paint that, all people are gonna see are pin pricks of orange and an orange lump behind PACE. less bumps, bigger, then bigger dots.
as for your handstyle. me likey, but the E ....looks like the c...spread apart maybe? don't change it, but it's too similar.
since everyone has been gettin awsome crits i figured id post some of my latest throwie attempts. crits please
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man PACE i dont know if its the dope man, but im likeing that sketch, i love simple easy to read pieces good job man.
and your handstyle is sick to....
FENONE out h34r:
pace the onl thing i dont like o nthat peice is the A but besides that i reacon it looks mad
i know chu were talking bout me mayne. :lol:
OKAY, i don't do throws but here goes:
-first one m is too far from the a. S is too complicated compared to teh rest of your letters. Top of the a is too fat, feed it salad. try making all your letters the same width. the E is pretty screwed up lol. widen it. Not like FAT wise. just...wider. don't make me draw it out.
-second one , work on your S!!!!!!! its the first letter they see
it's too small compared to your other letters. the bottom part of the S especially. again the top of the A, TOO FAT. run it a couple kms. your shadows are a TAD off. makea focus point, use a ruler. this is grade school ish.
- aughhhh three?! fine.
i'd say it's the best out of all of them. your shadows are def better here.
and whats with the thingy next to the !
YOu're lucky . i never crit this good. Remember. constructive crit here. just pointing out what i see
i like those throw alot put the letters closser. good throwies.
another late night peice new style need crits on it.
p.s. thanks for the crits on my last i'll redo and post later.
reminds me of an amoeba. i like the ends in the fill other than that it's pretty plain lose the little white things in there.....i dunno what you were going for. ope, here goes half ass again.
Hope it helped none the less
feliks is a hoe
realy appreciated it feliks ill try work on what u said.
edit: oh and the little thing next to the ! is a 6, thats why the dot has the little " things, its an 06 but also an !
Thanks for a helpful critic faggot.
Anything you'd recommend to make the V and O better?
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