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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. some guy from NCI...

    some guy from NCI... Elite Member

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  2. Rane *DF* *HM*

    Rane *DF* *HM* Senior Member

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    ai77.photobucket.com_albums_j42_Manchgraff603_Picture.jpg


    ...i know...the e looks retarded. Any other crits?
     
  3. MF Feed Letter

    MF Feed Letter Senior Member

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  4. Kata

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    reminds me of a japanese talk show to be honest
     
  5. Kata

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    bump


    just for like 2 more crits please =X


    edit: by the way the color is really desaturated in these pics- i was just looking at the normal versions in my book and realized the scanner must have sucked away some of the life from them.
     
  6. xAWOKE.925

    xAWOKE.925 Senior Member

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  7. Code

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  8. xAWOKE.925

    xAWOKE.925 Senior Member

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    Its awful. Damnit. crit my damn pieces.
     
  9. Code

    Code Senior Member

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    BUMP FOR SOME FUCKING CRITZ PLEEEEEEEAASAAAAH [/b][/quote]
    lol fine i will crit yours since you crit mine, even though it wasent that good of a crit :p

    THe first scetch i like, but the color scheme for some reason doesent really catch me.

    The second one is creative, but i just think it kind of looks wierd :)

    The Third Scetch is my faverite, even though it looks cursive the color scheme and the letter structure is good
     
  10. Kata

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    bump


    just for like 2 more crits please =X


    edit: by the way the color is really desaturated in these pics- i was just looking at the normal versions in my book and realized the scanner must have sucked away some of the life from them. [/b][/quote]
    cough BUMP CRITS cough cough
     
  11. ion-i

    ion-i Elite Member

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    dont bump shit thats on the same fucking page!
    people will crit it if they want, just give it time.

    jesus.

    edit: ok heres some crits, your letter structure isn't even equivelent to being called letters. start simpler! stop trying to do wildstyle! if you start simple, your letters will form over time and youll develop your own style.
     
  12. C3ZR ONE

    C3ZR ONE Moderator

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    word...ghostboys post is directly on point.... ;)
     
  13. Quake

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    And bumb for crits??? (<<What ever)
     
  14. beefgerky

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    "penises soaring thru the air! spurting love juice everywere" lol..
     
  15. slEEt

    slEEt Elite Member

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    Cans need caps.
     
  16. SiLeNt-BoB

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  18. spek.

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    ai19.photobucket.com_albums_b190_violLWK_spekkk.jpg

    fucked up on 3d and i think the e fuckin blows but..crits??
     
  19. Eskimo33

    Eskimo33 Senior Member

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    3d is way off the K could use some work. Dont make the bottom of the E come back in, and the end of it doesn't look anything like any other letter wich makes it stand out. keep working on it.
     
  20. svker

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