bump just for like 2 more crits please =X edit: by the way the color is really desaturated in these pics- i was just looking at the normal versions in my book and realized the scanner must have sucked away some of the life from them.
HEres a new one i came up with, tried to add 3d. I know the other 0 looks like an A but other than that what do you guys think. [Broken External Image]:http://img347.imageshack.us/img347/1011/honor1tl.jpg
BUMP FOR SOME FUCKING CRITZ PLEEEEEEEAASAAAAH [/b][/quote] lol fine i will crit yours since you crit mine, even though it wasent that good of a crit THe first scetch i like, but the color scheme for some reason doesent really catch me. The second one is creative, but i just think it kind of looks wierd The Third Scetch is my faverite, even though it looks cursive the color scheme and the letter structure is good
bump just for like 2 more crits please =X edit: by the way the color is really desaturated in these pics- i was just looking at the normal versions in my book and realized the scanner must have sucked away some of the life from them. [/b][/quote] cough BUMP CRITS cough cough
dont bump shit thats on the same fucking page! people will crit it if they want, just give it time. jesus. edit: ok heres some crits, your letter structure isn't even equivelent to being called letters. start simpler! stop trying to do wildstyle! if you start simple, your letters will form over time and youll develop your own style.
[Broken External Image]:http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/8626/asti4eb.jpg half finshed sketch..a'll finsh it off tomorrow
3d is way off the K could use some work. Dont make the bottom of the E come back in, and the end of it doesn't look anything like any other letter wich makes it stand out. keep working on it.
Keeping it simple, give your thoughts, advice on this. [Broken External Image]:http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/633/graff0486bg.th.jpg