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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. spuck

    spuck Senior Member

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    dont they?
    i'll keep that in mind

    and while im here...

    MUSASHI, i like the looks of that throwie, but is it supposed to be/say anything? i cant tell

    and in regards to the skeam picture sife quoted, thats pretty sweet, i especially like the pink and orange, the only thing that kinda bugs me is the triple quotes at the begginning there
     
  2. pace1

    pace1 Senior Member

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    skeam- like the styl
    Spuck- simpler work with letter structure more.

    heres something i did qwik
    ai57.photobucket.com_albums_g220_ginoforce_PACE2222.jpg
     
  3. Skeam

    Skeam Senior Member

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    thanx heaps for the crits guys, i just tried a completely different style, kinda sharper... and it looks completely shit. i think i mgunna stik to this style.

    matt
     
  4. spuck

    spuck Senior Member

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    [Broken External Image]:http://f10.putfile.com/7/18823592250-thumb.jpg

    yet another, resisted the urge to make it 3d this time...
    pretty simple, it only took me a few minutes, kinda roller-esque
    im trying to come up with a style and i think big, fat and blocky suits me...

    i am just churning shit out tonight, i should probably stop before i create a monster....
     
  5. pace1

    pace1 Senior Member

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    widths should all be the same size!!!
    everyone who starts keep that in mind and also keep it basic


    heres a throw i think i like alot
    ai57.photobucket.com_albums_g220_ginoforce_Pathro.jpg
     
  6. Kata

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    try it with a thick marker and make it plump and see if it looks neater- i dont know why but i think it would look a bit cooler like that in my brain, however it is yours so


    blaahhh
     
  7. beefgerky

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  8. HoodRichSucka

    HoodRichSucka Elite Member

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    View attachment 208232



    my tag is DOPE, but i might make it ARE seeing as i havent thrown it up yet... lmk, thanks

    -ad
     
  9. beefgerky

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  10. HoodRichSucka

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    sry to start a new page and not leave an opinion. gerk, its tight as hell, no lie, i may not kno much for being toy, but i like it straight up. simple but simple is good man. good work for sure

    -ad
     
  11. xenk

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  14. toxus

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    bob...
    [Broken External Image]:http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/51/asti9lg.jpg
    The A looks a too big commpard to the other letters.
    I think its lacking structure.
    Oh and, i dont like that little part coming off from the T.
    But its quite nice ;)
     
  15. EZ3iL

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    ai77.photobucket.com_albums_j46_ez3il_IMG_21161.jpg
    ai77.photobucket.com_albums_j46_ez3il_IMG_21231.jpg
    Critz...
    And here are some characters my girl friend drew
    ai77.photobucket.com_albums_j46_ez3il_IMG_21201.jpg
    ai77.photobucket.com_albums_j46_ez3il_IMG_21191.jpg
    She doesnt know im posting these also she doesnt write
     
  16. EZ3iL

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    Just thought id add a picture of my kitty
    ai77.photobucket.com_albums_j46_ez3il_IMG_21121.jpg
     
  17. alive

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    spuck- it looks much better! make your i capital so it looks like this: "I" dont worry about color right now, keep working on the letter structure, thats the point of the blockbusters, getting down the basic form of the letters. keep going, i see improvement, one step at a time.

    code- sry but it looks terrible, scratch it and get to blockbusters with spuck. dont try to stylize it, use simple, straight lines.

    bob- i like it alot, but itl look soooo much better if u use straighter lines like toxus said and lose some of the extensions. in fact, itl look pretty hott.

    xenk- it looks much better, keep going. mostly just work on the X, it doesnt look like an X, more like a messed up N or H. your overlapping a bit too much, and stop worrying about color. u shouldnt have shine without shadow, it goes oposite the shadow.

    gerk- very hott, i love it. but maybe you line thickness could be a little more consistant, expecially on the first one, like the E. oh and your letters fluctuate in size a little on the second. all just minor things, i love it.

    ez3il- dont worry about color yet! and stop struggling so hard to stylize it. id like to see some blockbusters from you.


    i better get some good crits on my next sketch
     
  18. Ethen

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  20. Ethen

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    done with paint any crits?