Words, shifted. Craze, I understand that you're anxious to improve, but steeze won't develop in the minute intervals between your posts. Be patient, exercise some personal criticsm. Now, I don't want to seem hypocritical, but can someone please critique my work? I've had one reply, but no advice... [Broken External Image]:http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/7149/esqbubblyrl4.jpg Reading back, I came off as a real jackass. I don't mean bubbles are infantile, clean and bold work is always sick regardless of the genre. [Broken External Image]:http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/5358/esqbunnypaintjk0.jpg Potential charac throw/peice once I earn can control?
thers nothing wrong with your work man, it doesnt need crits the rabit should be walled, and so shud the one above it just work on your handstyle a bit
eTAW - I really like how that looks (thought the pic is blurry), but what's up with the purple blotch 3/4 through? haha aga trance - thanks alot, brobro. Niccsacc - That signature picture is bloody ridiculous. Whoever penned that is a fuggin deity. I'm not sure what 'cold IMO' means though... Any notes for the bubbles?
Holy hell, shifted, that's a mighty compliment! Seirously, it means so much. Thank you! Any tips for can control? or should that be in another forum? Niccsacc, that's an ill idea...I'll put it to paper.
Ha Alright, just thought I'd ask... Near, I like your 'ne' throw. But I'd cover up the line that extends from the left of the E's 'eye'... Just my opinion.
work on your letter structure alot, dont attempt that style unless you have simples down work on your 3d use better coloring tecniques and add some handstyle
Not really happy with it but whatever. And heres some old thing I cant remember if I posted here or not.
work on your shadow...there are alot of places where your shadow is different from other areas work on your handstyle work on your letter structure
3D is out of proportion in places / The arrow at the top right comes out of no-where / some parts of the letter are thin while other extremely more thick go back to basics man, i'm doing basics not too bad. (Directed at neer)
its pretty easy of what everyone said, sound it out I-T-S N-O-T C-O-N-S-I-S-T-A-N-T if it were 3d it would be consistant, thats why everyone thinks its a shadow dont post your shit here and not expect crits
I did excepect crits, thats why I posted here. I asked if you could show me where you mean. All I see is the inside arm of the G. And your the only one that thought it was a shadow I think its pretty apparent its 3d. And shadows are just as consitstant as 3D, "if it were 3d it would be consistant, thats why everyone thinks its a shadow" doesnt make any sense.
hey everybody GUESS WHOS BACK? anybody miss me? didnt think so anyways. NEAR i like it all a lot. ur gooood. CHOP, same goes for u, the connection with the G is a bit weak though, and the G is a bit too hidden compared to the other letters. i woulda made the top extension on the H smaller too. work on ur shadow! i wish i could give u guys more crits and better crits, but ur oth better then me. esquire, i love the throw, and the character is amazing. u can put that in the big boy thread. damn. fucking incredible coloring job. finally, NEER. damn. sorry but it needs mad work. go simple. can you show me some blockbusters? if u do that, i can help u keep moving on your way. peace.