[Broken External Image]:http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/5360/politiksketchfv1.jpg my first sketch after going through the "New 2 Graff? Start Here." thread, it helped me a lot.. tell me what you think (keep in mind i'm still a major toy)
^ I'd say try to make them a little more bubbley, with a littlepoint on eacht corner and youll have your self a nice throwie.
is that supposed to be 3d or shadow, if so it looks real bad. you need to fix that but the letters look good
that evex is nice, it looks like you used a ballpoint?? And i like the handstyles onit. that mrceb stuff isent toy. [Broken External Image]:http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20060808/02/3/8/b/38ba4b78274bbece5781b3286c7c7913200608080_full.jpg comments please?
beauty... i love the curves on the a and u, colours didnt scan well cuz ther baby blues and pinks, crits welcome
Here is something new i came up with, still on the simples, so just tell me what you think. And sorry for all the little smudges wasent able to clean them offf [Broken External Image]:http://img110.imageshack.us/img110/1305/simplefb9.jpg
I feel good cuz I could actually read this one till it came down to the T and Y but I think I found them. Keep it up man.
first thing, resize your images please. it doesnt take much time and it makes pics much much easier to look at. keep ALL of your letters the same size. and keep them even, dont have them going up and down like you have. the 3D should not go that far around the bottom side of the O's. when you are outlining a sketch learn not to use a bunch of little strokes to make one line, i used to do this and once i stopped my sketches looked a lot cleaner. you'll get better at outlining and coloring with practice. i find it fucking helluh hard to outline because i cant keep steady, and ive been drawing for years and years (not graff). its really sloppy looking. if you get a white gel pen or even some whiteout you can clean up a ton of that shit on your sketches. there's some tips, but you dont have to really listen to me ive only been writing for 3 months and i may be wrong.
stevie, overlap your letters more, and try to keep the parts of them the same thickness. remove the random looking addons. the left side of the O, the bottomright part of the T, the arrow in the K. all of your letters are bending the opposite way of the P. and try some 3D