hope i dont fuck with ur thread. im seeing some beautiful shit. [edit: i've been told the feet are too bulky. i like em, and feel that they would look scrawny if they were any smaller.]
i think it would look better if you didn't make him look like a fat cap. probably defeats the whole purpose, but i think it's a cool little character. just not feeling the cap idea.
[Broken External Image]:http://img33.imageshack.us/img33/4774/img00085t.jpg Quick thing. I like the obese guy back there too.
If you have the time to check in those two books, you might find some intresting info... Or good reference for future drawings http://www.scribd.com/doc/2289715/Cartooning-for-the-Beginner-by-Christopher-Hart http://www.scribd.com/doc/334333/Constructive-Anatomy