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Critic please

Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Andre Lindsey, Oct 30, 2020.

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  1. Andre Lindsey

    Andre Lindsey New Member

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    Hi all, would love some feedback on my latest piece, I know I messed up the highlights as there in the wrong place, however aside from that can I have critic on my letters please.

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  2. Ray of Today

    Ray of Today Elite Member

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    What would you say needs to be improved here playa?
     
  3. Andre Lindsey

    Andre Lindsey New Member

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    not sure that’s why I’m asking for feedback ?
     
  4. Ray of Today

    Ray of Today Elite Member

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    There's not a lot of uniformity in your letters as far as size, thickness, form. Your E should overlap your R like the other letters do. Your R is all scrunched in and busted up on the right side. Your letters don't all have to be the same height but some of them should be sized more like the W. You've chosen an akward angle for your 3d that doesn't help the letters and you've added 3d where it shouldn't be like the bottom of the w. You would be better doing your 3d left or right for now. Try to space your letters out a little more instead of trying to make each one hide behind the shape of the last letter.
     
  5. Andre Lindsey

    Andre Lindsey New Member

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    Thanks for the critic, really appreciate it