Only critic is that the "M" is moving in the opposite direction as the other letters...

 

I'd say your not ready for what your trying to achieve. Come up with a solid straight letter on a baseline. From there you can add serifs but nothing to crazy. If you keep it simple you wont look like such a toy.

 

Lose the quotation marks for now, start simple and one day it'll come up by itself and it'll blend in just perfect, also the first three letters are fine but the last ones seem to separates themselves, squeez em like you mop