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Freestyle Rapping

Discussion in 'General Discussion' started by fame, Nov 6, 2004.

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  1. NICCSACC

    NICCSACC Banned

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    you dont really rap as for writing no its "you dont..."
    i got all your tags off tha wall like menudo
    i got more heat i swear you couldnt shoot those
    go to toy forum you need help from them culos
    cuz you less than tha worst bout a hundred past zero
    if i took yo as to court youd need more than shapiro
    cuz you fake like a silicone pillow in a stripper
    i got cats on tha fence like that dude john tripper
    hang you out like some draws fulla piss from my miller
    no beef i just dropped like a shit on tha first
    120 pounds later got this kid sportin a purse
     
  2. syrup2

    syrup2 Elite Member

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    Im trying to make half a mill
    and hotbox a mercdes
    too bad b.o and paintstains aint to cool with the ladys
    but it dont really phase me
    cuz it aint nothing like this
    I gotta get this bread and paint these walls
    and I got 5 cans of rusto along with my balls

    -odonthesetrees nice rhymes yo
     
  3. ODonthesetrees

    ODonthesetrees Elite Member

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    word thanks man, i just come in here for shits and giggles...im more into classic rock and poetry than rap id say, but if i hear a fresh rhyme ill lsiten to some rap
     
  4. syrup2

    syrup2 Elite Member

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    we all need are shits and giggles sometimes
     
  5. C-money fresh!

    C-money fresh! Elite Member

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    yao.

    im back im not black but im ready to kill
    yes your damn right c-moneys lines thrill.
    i got some fresh ass lines that im ready to post if any of yall wanna battle youl get burnt like dry toast.
    i gots a tummy ache up i can deal wif dat.
    il bust you in the lip make that shit feal reall fat.
    as of tomarrow im off to new olreans.
    getting drunk as a fuck while my sneakers stay clean.
    yeah i smoke boges and i fuck with game dutches.
    fuck with c-murda and il put you in crutches.
     
  6. ODonthesetrees

    ODonthesetrees Elite Member

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    you're raps sound like a white kid hummin
    oh wait thats what they really are, you wern't frontin
    you're an arrogant maniacle bitch
    and you think you're the shit and you think you an hit
    well i can hit with my lines
    twice as much damage in half the time
    how many of you peopel can say somethign smart
    without talking botu drugs cause weve all done our part
    i hate these mainstream lines about clubns
    and drinking and smokign and girls and dubs
    fuck all that nonsense
    lets get back on track
    there i was spitting for yall, sure was wack
     
  7. sketch3

    sketch3 Banned

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    yo yo yo check it yo, u diss missta fresh,ill carv a hole in ur chest,
    u about to get pawned like we was playin chess, M-F-P-C YA HERRRD
     
  8. TylerDurden

    TylerDurden Elite Member

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    daaaaaaaaaang
     
  9. Excalibur

    Excalibur Senior Member

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    I'm the real, I never need a hype man
    and my freshness still shocks ya like lightnin'
    it's frightnin' how i'm sykin' out these lames
    playin the same games, no play from the dames
    Yeah it was me Basetwo markin over you tag
    And it wasn't too hard cause your name ain't up far
    shitting on your weak shit like a japanese porn star
     
  10. ODonthesetrees

    ODonthesetrees Elite Member

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    you lost all the flow with the line ending in "tag"

    you say you're the real and you don't need a conman
    but you also said you don't get play from the girls and
    i take it all as a lie cause its one then another
    hold up on the contradictions while i fuck your mother
    damn she rides it fast and she rides it hard
    but her pussy feels like fucking a jar of lard
    you know what i mean when its too damn sloppy
    she needs a vaccum to clean that socket
     
  11. Jugga

    Jugga Elite Member

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    woke up in a dark hot coffin,
    oh my god, I'm queer..
    I'm in liberace's body,
    he's been dead for years..
    clawed my way out of the death pit,
    a new life before me..
    how the fuck's a decomposed body gonna cap a 40...?

    I need juice:

    old english is the weapon of choice..
    maybe I could convince it's me to one of by boys..
    sure,
    I got a rotten disposition,
    but fuck, I'm on a mission..
    to put my self in a compromizing, alcohol indused position..
    people staring in disgust at me all over the place,
    I'm like "wussuh cuhh? do I got a booger on my face"
    then I though..
    "what's wrong, B.. you a zombie.. step in the next liquor store, snatch a brew, and remember to moan as you leave the place calmly.."
    and so I did,
    a walking, talking, saucy, post-moredem liberace..
    singing to the sky about how nobody's gonna stop me...
    and damn,
    my mind is telling me to go mutt out some sluts..
    but my body's telling me to go hunting for butts..
    so I turned a blind eye cause a nut is a nut,
    but I made sure to strap a rubber on so our dicks wouldn't touch...
     
  12. AteskOne

    AteskOne Elite Member

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    marry me? :wub:


    excalibur...shit was dope.

    edit* jugga i missed yours but i just read it...that was wonderful :wub: . really dope flow and the rhymes were hilarious. i just want to know where you came up with the idea for that :huh:??? lol
     
  13. Excalibur

    Excalibur Senior Member

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    you lost all the flow with the line ending in "tag"

    you say you're the real and you don't need a conman
    but you also said you don't get play from the girls and
    i take it all as a lie cause its one then another
    hold up on the contradictions while i fuck your mother
    damn she rides it fast and she rides it hard
    but her pussy feels like fucking a jar of lard
    you know what i mean when its too damn sloppy
    she needs a vaccum to clean that socket [/b][/quote]
    Duuuuh, that's why it's called a "freestyle" I just threw it up off the top of the dome. I don't plan out my freestyle like some lames out there, it's what comes to mind at the time. and if it loses flow, it loses flow.
     
  14. syrup2

    syrup2 Elite Member

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    why must u say nigguh so much

    your not talking to anyone whos of african americsa decent
    you have a point but dont be so silly
     
  15. Kayone707

    Kayone707 Moderator

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    dont be so silly..
    you dont have to cuss, just look at big willy...
    will smith.. brush your teeth.
    ah-skeet skeet skeet
     
  16. syrup2

    syrup2 Elite Member

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    fire kay straight lyircal fire
    :D
     
  17. Kayone707

    Kayone707 Moderator

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    YEAHHHHHHHHHHHH
    *in lil jon voice
    aimg.alibaba.com_photo_50860951_spinner_necklace.jpg
     
  18. Gear_07

    Gear_07 Member

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    yo makr ecko sure sucks at rapping huh? :lol: [/b][/quote]
    hhaahaha ya real funny
     
  19. Jugga

    Jugga Elite Member

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    self concious narcissist,
    one that exists within the grips of the only skin she's grown to love,
    but hates the discomfort..
    apply's synthetic beauty and taints self proclaimed perfection..
    covers up the flawless lies with unmarred deception..
    flaunts what she's got, thinking nobody knows that she's got it..
    but her uncertainty quickly harbors it when somebody watches..
    self concious narcissist in love with thoughts of suicide and self pride..
    completely smothered with the beauty that's lacking inside..
    with the uncharted ability to brighten lives with smiles..
    her auto-despised being molests her inner child..
    The child weeps,
    for force-fed mental masturbation,
    is just another cry for self-help lost in translation..
     
  20. TylerDurden

    TylerDurden Elite Member

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