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Freestyle Rapping

Discussion in 'General Discussion' started by fame, Nov 6, 2004.

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  1. Craze

    Craze Senior Member

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    yo you say shut the fuck up/
    i say back the fuck up or end up in a dump truck/
    you dumb fuck cant speak cause you lips are stuck/
    you got one foot in the muk/
    and your runin outa luck cause you see im the one drivin the dam truck/
    get up off yo ass and get mashed/
    see you level of luaghs ive surpassed/
    why aint u replyin ur computer crash/
    i got a secret stash of cash/
    just to humiliate you in in the past/
    your lifes gone in a flash/
    all cause of one line and a wanabe bash/
    now im forced to slash/
    and a king always handles your wack toy ass!
     
  2. CRN-one

    CRN-one Senior Member

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    I guess it's time for me to come out and put all the haters on blast
    Like a broadway reviewer I'll sit here and tear apart the cast
    but what I won't do is try to get my ghetto card
    by talking shit about nines and gats and rock and tryin to act hard
    I swear I come correct and I keep my shit legit
    and I'd rather insult you with large words that you won't even get
    I could call you all out but that seems like a waste of time
    the last thing I'd want to do is throw away one single rhyme
    on someone that's as worthless as some of the kids in this thread
    I'd rather blow a line of rat poison and let you all find me dead
    so you can sit around tomorrow and be like "ah man, he's gone"
    "we wish we had listened when he tried to help us along"
    "we really should have stopped acting raw and paid some attention"
    "cause every time he spit a verse it was like a fucking lesson"
    back to basics, kids, lets start with something entry level:
    volume one, section A - rhyming is essential, it's entirely instrumental
    to the whole entire process of the art of freestyle
    you can't just lift a mic and run your mouth and say you're wild
    oh, I'm sorry, I forgot that it's now cool to say "wyle out"
    I guess thats why when you all talk I seriously have my doubts
    that any of you have even been to the hood
    let alone lived there, killed there, or clocked there - that's understood
    You all gonna run your mouths like a bunch of pussy bitches
    this last sentence does not apply to my friends, you guys keep me in stitches
    Coka Nostra got my back on this lyrical assault mission
    Main Event is new to me but he's moving into second position
    HoodRich - I'll always have your back, let them talk trash
    we'll string together rhymes of variable intensity until we put them on smash
    Bouncing Soul, I know we never worked together but it's chill
    every time you drop a rhyme you straight up fucking kill
    But honestly, I don't feel the need to have to flex my steez
    that's my style for all of you who don't remember hearing that on BET
    I swear to the fucking spaghetti monster god up in the sky
    if I hear one more kid talk about his gat I'll fucking cry
    and when I finish sobbing I'll hunt you down and tell your mother
    that you're sitting on the internet, tryin to be one bad something-or-other
    see, I got respect for my elders, so I won't curse at your moms
    but I will take some photos of you wearing your skirt, sweater and pom poms
    cause we all know you like to dress up like a woman and touch yourself in the mirror
    they did an expose on that shit on News Hour with Jim Lehrer
    It turns out if your kid acts like a thug chances are he's gay
    not trying to call anyone out, man, but keep your homosexuality at bay
    I realize I normally incorporate a vocabulary that is spectacular
    but today I'm feeling gully, so I'll use the ghetto vernacular
    I'll crush you kids, I won't take shit
    from someone who wears his fucking pants below his hips
    and you can throw that "white tee thats down below your knees"
    right in the fucking trash, that shit makes you look obese
    like a 300 pound marshmellow with a sideways Knicks cap
    who likes to open his mouth and watch his fucking lips flap
    and probably fell in love with the sound of his own voice
    I can assure you, in the rhyme game you're not the people's choice
    I mean, at least you're not sitting here biting Ice T
    oh wait, that's old school, let me reference someone you see
    on a regular basis when you watch your MTV
    I mean, cribs would never lie about how hot the streets can be
    anyway, back to what I was saying, you act like you're "fiddy cent"
    and every time you hear his shit you pitch a fucking tent
    you homo fan boy wannabe abercrombie and fitch ghetto masterpieces
    make me want to vomit and then scoop up all the pieces
    and force them down your throat so that you can choke on my damn lunch
    and then I'll ressucitate you, so I can rape you and introduce you to the "donkey punch"
    we'll video tape the event so that the whole world can see
    how a pussy little wanna be gangster got donkey punched by me.
     
  3. "Riot"

    "Riot" Elite Member

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    shittt.
    dope verse.
     
  4. Vagrant

    Vagrant Elite Member

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  5. CRN-one

    CRN-one Senior Member

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    thanks. I try not to fuck around.
     
  6. "Riot"

    "Riot" Elite Member

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    CRN-ONE just raped this thread.
    Violently.
     
  7. CRN-one

    CRN-one Senior Member

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    and you just made my sig. haha
     
  8. "Riot"

    "Riot" Elite Member

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  9. TylerDurden

    TylerDurden Elite Member

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    daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaang
     
  10. SEZ

    SEZ Senior Member

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    to think crn was going to try battle me...lol thats some A-grade rhymes...
     
  11. MainEvent

    MainEvent Senior Member

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    good shit man, nice concept piece putting kids in place on typing up shit they have no business typing haha. appreciate the shoutout, stay up
     
  12. CRN-one spit a long ass verse, and brought on the reign
    lecturing these kids on freestyling without speaking their name
    big-ups to him, he came hard and let his words play into motion
    answering this threads biggest problems while getting across his notion
    he spit complex, but yet simple enough for kids to comprehend him
    he told a story and taught a lecture, without closing off with a proper endin'
    giving shout outs to my boys main and hood, and we all know that nostra is good
    but i'm not dick riding, more of just giving a lyricist props
    he just cleaned this thread with his lines, wipin em up without mops
    and i'll admit i've spit about gats in my raps, but never that i shot shit
    sayin just as much as i know about guns, thats that i never had it
    i'm not ghetto, nor am i even close to livin in on a sketchy block
    just like CRN said, these kids got two hands but no nine, unlike a clock
    so they cannot say they killin kids in the street with they mad glock
    i didn't know what to say when i started typin this shit on the spot
    but this keystyle has shown to be one of my better one's for rappin
    so jack some other kid's bars, all you doin is kidnappin
    but then again, it's there, so it's about to happen
     
  13. Oink.

    Oink. Elite Member

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    malt liquor wishes like a spool of drowning fishes
    better to sit back and do the dishes, sinking in the sink
    tottler unable to think, kick form of rhyme to put perspective on the current elective, subdued and selective a profit private detective
    pen hits the paper
    sets the world to vapor
    set out to harm, battle arms making money no car alarms.




    ah pullin shit outve my ass.
     
  14. CRN-one

    CRN-one Senior Member

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    I hate to come up last,
    but I come strong and I come fast
    my medula oblongata is throbbing from the pressure,
    rhymes in my mind so dense that you can not measure
    put on the Leak Bros and let it all hang out
    call out the Shermanator and watch the haters pout
    seein shit with my third eye while my other two blind,
    going out of my damn fool mind,
    air bubbles slip through veins,
    causing a massive embolism in my brain,
    left having a seziure on the ground
    I'll leave a pretty corpse to be found
    I shake and shudder,
    right ventricle goes spat-spat-sputter,
    lay it all out so there is no doubt
    cut my chest open, CPR with a car battery and a razor blade, street surgery is what its about
    ressurect me to the rhymes and in time maybe I'll be fine, maybe I'll just die, but in all honesty I won't be missed
    my vocalizations make me a legend and a monster all at once, crowds be clapping but by the end they're all pissed
    I'm not famous, just legendary, I don't front or pretend to be the virgin mary
    I'm not perfect, far from it, dope addict by day, at night the anti-superhero - CRN-Scary
    I'm the asshole that shot your grandma for five bucks to buy a bag
    feel remorse? of course, but only for the fact that she was a broke old hag
    if she had a couple bucks more then I might have actually gotten high
    now I'm just angry and out stabbing hookers, I only nut when they cry
    abused as a child, they force fed me bad feelings and made me into a psychotic
    drinkin bleach, cuttin my teeth, like a David Lynch movie all twisted on narcotics


    not my best but it's early and I'm not really that high yet haha
    give me time.

    and keep posting people, lets keep this thread alive - and please, no more fake wankster bullshit, ok?
     
  15. AnteUp

    AnteUp Elite Member

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    thas the longest fuckin verse i ever seen...
     
  16. CRN-one

    CRN-one Senior Member

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    did you see my verse on the last page? it's twice as long haha
     
  17. "Riot"

    "Riot" Elite Member

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    3415
     
    Last edited: Nov 21, 2007
  18. La Coka Nostra

    La Coka Nostra Elite Member

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    use bars bro...
    2 lines = 1 bar
    last word of every bar rhymes.
     
  19. "Riot"

    "Riot" Elite Member

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    I don't understand?
    never heard of bars?
     
  20. CRN-one

    CRN-one Senior Member

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    it's elementary, son.

    bars comprise verses.

    it's an easier way to organize your shit, too.