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Freestyle Rapping

Discussion in 'General Discussion' started by fame, Nov 6, 2004.

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  1. GeSuS_KRiST

    GeSuS_KRiST Moderator

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    thanks man im stoned so liek a said its a bit rusty i been think about getin abck into writing alot lately
  2. GeSuS_KRiST

    GeSuS_KRiST Moderator

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    word is bond, i smoke the best crystal-meth in yuh front lawn
    im hot ta death, with grimey roten meth mouth breath
    ay dawg hold up one sec there one hit of this glass left..
    yeahhhhhhh now take that shit, dun be a bitch... hold the hit
    now ditch the fix to the floor like dumb quick..
    what a bore this foils tapped out the liquids gone there is no more
    twiggity tweakin like cage was liggity leaking in waterworld back in 04
    time flys, fam dies, she lies, i dont see the same for my mi amor
    she tanted my visions that mental mind fuck timebomb/whore
    fuck it though better left for dead ill get her head
    and get the red..adrenaline gland fa sure
    cas the antichrist said it would take me high then i ever been before
    ..fuck the abuse ill put her to use spun the fuck out robbin the poor... gurl's life
    Last edited: Mar 20, 2008
  3. "Riot"

    "Riot" Elite Member

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    ges. why the fuck did you have to pick on me man.
    couldve roasted someone else. i mean...cmon!

  4. GeSuS_KRiST

    GeSuS_KRiST Moderator

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    lol cas u were the last person to post, and thats usually who i go after =)
  5. "Riot"

    "Riot" Elite Member

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    damn it.
    mann next time you about to post. warn me hahahah

    but for real.
    that was some dope shit though.
  6. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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  7. Started off as a freestyle earlier, decided to type it down...

    My world has been shook I came back to reality
    Little things aren't as important anymore is my mentality
    I used to be all bout my clothes and kicks
    My mind focused on tryin' to be with these chicks
    I'm seein' clear now, non-stop punchlines and lyricist tricks
    All these kids talk about today is stayin' strapped with a gat
    When they only got lead in a number 2 and they rock a low hat
    You see I don't give a fuck you did time or you pulled off a crime
    If your shit isn't legit I'm a dismantle your line, pick out the lie in your rhyme
    So what you slang rock out on the block holdin' a glock
    You couldn't kill time if you held a hammer to a clock
    You kept that shit cocked but you never popped a shot
    So enough is enough with all your "ghetto" "tough guy" lyrics
    I hold respect for a few only and put them in high spirits
    You see it's incredible when the pen unleashes on the paper
    Sparks a reaction as lyrics pose questions like an instigator
    Not just leavin' you breathless you'll need a second respirator
    I'm waitin' to blow up although I hold a mic as the detonator
    I would rather stay unknown and put out good quality music
    Only hold in high regards to those I respect who view it
    Or I can try to come with heat off the top of the dome
    An insightful poet who in under a minute can lay down a poem
    It seems like rappers relate better to a trash can with their music
    Makin' a WHOLE good album today is rare, is it a conspiracy?
    Nah just a theory, but when I speak I want people to hear me
    It'd be hard to turn down a check for a cool mil
    Just to spit rhymes on a mic for money is ill, although the industries kill
    They take away your music sense and fuck with your will
    Today Hip Hop has become less of a relevant movement
    We're pass self-destruction, it's time for a new re-construction
    Whack ass "rappers" make me wanna lose it, the music they abuse it
    Just to get highly paid, groupie hoes so you know they get laid
    In the hood nah they should have stayed, but the ghetto got played
    It's the basis of everyone's raps talkin' bout sellin drugs and holdin gats
    Fuck that
    I'ma spit pure crack, keep the game intact
    So sit back, relax, and lose yourself to these tracks
    Because when I rhyme I only tell the true facts
    Hidden Teknique respects Nas, BIG, Noyd, Hov, Paps
    Big L, Pac, Binary, Immortal, Em, and Andre 3 Stacks
    Fuck Hip Hop The Industries can have it BACK.
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  8. sketch3

    sketch3 Banned

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    on sum demonic shit, dantes ninth circle,
    lyrics will merk u,
    my words arnt just hurtfull,
    shockwaves alone will leave ur skin purple,
    dwel in city streets that feinds like to lurk through,
    theyd stick u for ur and shirt to,
    thats why i gotta roll with beserk crews,
    who'd start swingin hachets befor ur boys could aleart you,
    to the lunatics asylem,
    i know disgusting and vile men
    torture their victems befor they defile em,
    corpses im pilein,
    like stocking shelvs in isle ten,
    at the devils supermarket,
    minds dark with,
    killer insticts that a shark gets,
    blood thirsty on nohas ark with,
    rooms full stupid kids and there smart pets

    drunk of the dome,
    heres the beat i used
  9. cebs oner

    cebs oner Senior Member

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    im a lyrical chemist venomist like pit viper strike like a sniper/wit percison like a incison from a surgeon/murderin beats wit ease like a disase i bring thse haters to they knees
  10. SAID

    SAID Moderator

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    the fuck out of here
    with your so called hard steez
    you gonna be the one on your knees
    eat your cunt bitch
    before i split you up open
    leave your defragmented body in a coffin
    ill be the only one laughin
    oh worddd, your a sniper?
    your flow sounds more like peter piper
    sure your rhymes are fine
    but in a real battle, you aint got no shine
    one of the the gullyest lyrasist
    just murked the "lyrical chemist venomist."
  11. sketch3

    sketch3 Banned

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    many men are shit,
    claim there marksmen then have missed,
    like this bitch made venamist,
    hit u with a dope punch line.then a fist,
    frontinlike u hard when a bitch,
    is wat u really are,
  12. cebs oner

    cebs oner Senior Member

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    never said i couold rap infact u dont know how to act prob never been on a track i write graf n thats a fact u dont know hip hop ur whole album gonna go flop .......... i live, eat n breathe hip hop u a rookie in this shit n im vet
  13. kog_throwie

    kog_throwie Senior Member

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    nuff "said" you flow is somewhat dead, talkin about coffins, shoot you in the head leave you worthless and i bet your friends would careless, ill eat you, like a hungry african
    and i dont care whos ass-yous-been-in , cause ill rape your girlfriend choke her up and if you provoke ill say sorry like we was burning the toke, uh you telling people that they cant shine
    i dont see no light on you, ill kill you with a lethal land mine, sell your arm for atleast a dime
    and if i see your dick, ill sew it on my forehead, pass the mac fill you up with some more lead.

    i love you said <3
  14. cebs oner

    cebs oner Senior Member

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    u may spit a few bars but u aint never did no real dirt n been behind bars
  15. cebs oner

    cebs oner Senior Member

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    know ya hip hop history n know why u do what u do true hip hop lives the 4 elements
  16. sketch3

    sketch3 Banned

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    prison aint nuttin to be proud off,
    cuss it means ur either getting fucked by lawyers or big black ******s
  17. cebs oner

    cebs oner Senior Member

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    fuck by laywers n i know it aint shit but it made me say fuck the system even more i dedacted to this hip hop game fuck the fame
  18. cebs oner

    cebs oner Senior Member

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    im a vandal n ainti goverment i do what i do cuz i love hip hop n belive n what is right fuck war fuck corrupt systems
  19. cebs oner

    cebs oner Senior Member

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    wanna know more pm me
  20. dullerium7

    dullerium7 Member

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    keep on runnin ya mouth, ima show you what the true meanin of pain is.
    im the one who hammered the first nail in jesus.
    name's big t but my *****s call me erak
    flow with the wickeds from philly
    gonna make you have a heart attack
    rip ya spleen out ya throat
    hang you out in my front yard
    then ima laugh when you choke
    grasp all your hopes
    and blow out your brains
    leavin nothin but gun smoke.