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Discussion in 'General Discussion' started by fame, Nov 6, 2004.

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  1. sketch3

    sketch3 Banned

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    if u front like u hustlein ill bumrush ur corner,
    no one to warn ya,
    any fool defending his patch,
    will get his dome semi detached,
    like suburban homes,
    front page news on ur local dispatch,
    so shut up if u dont wanna get bitch slaped,
    with bats, i dont even need to diss pass,
    his shits wack,
     
  2. JEDI-MASTER

    JEDI-MASTER Elite Member

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    dmx fan huh...
    new verse im fuckin wit
    Tattered memories s are all I have left
    The constant battling of willpower
    The Battle of right and wrong has scarred me
    Greedy Thoughts manifest
    Blinding Emotions are born
    Yet all I can find inside myself is scorn
    I know Love for u is what I swore
    My mistake
    Ya turned ur back on me and became what I despised
    Jus another junkie whore
    Thought u was better than that, took the chance
    Steeped up to the plateI took a swing and missed
    Ya c today living is more of a chore than a choice
    Ive kept my feeling bottled inside for to long now u have to deal wit the ferocity of my voice
    This feeling inside hangs around like a noose,Yet I cant stop loving u
    Imust be insane, I must have sum screws loose
    Walk a mile in my shoes and ull c bitch how I fuckin loved u
    Shut ur face bitch, no ifs and or butts I gotta lotta aggression need be worked out
    New level of fury rises, ascension has grasped me and claimed me as its own
    Sleeping wit the enemy I already know, fuck it by now ur own blasphemy should be hittin home
    Animosity rises from the ashes, I take a measured breath
    Catch my calm and collective
    Before I do sumthing sketchy that could end up a death
     
  3. sibil juggalo

    sibil juggalo Senior Member

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    why do i read line after line of the shit you say
    about guns, drugs, and how you smoke weed everyday
    maybe im oblivious to your sense of purpose
    if i knew how to write maybe itd make you nervous
    but i dont know how to rap i can barely spit
    but page after page of the same written shit
    your mouth might as well be my asshole its spoken shit
     
  4. JEDI-MASTER

    JEDI-MASTER Elite Member

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    simple but good, jus 1 thing if i was u wouldnt use the same rhyme like that (shit) twice in a row
     
  5. SBOMBS

    SBOMBS Elite Member

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    simple and good like ur sista
    brown butta lurka, i plonge my seeds of evilness
    deeply in ur eye socket, mr im a masta
    it hurts like taibo or a kick in the pelvis
    i like to play mortal kombat deception
    and appropriate all em cool words like annniliation
    ima mad modafucka like a general cancer
    kreepin in ur nutter

    they also call me the malibu gangsta
     
  6. ForGiven

    ForGiven Senior Member

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    would it be bad to say.....hmmm.....i didnt like it(except the cancer line)
    and im sad to say are you sure you wanna be a gangsta from MALIBU!?!?!?!?! nothin to malibu but you might want a better "title". lol
     
  7. SBOMBS

    SBOMBS Elite Member

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    YOU SO INNOCENT I WAANNA RAPE UR ANUS
    SPREAD GOOD SALTY BUTTER ON UR RECTAL
    IMA PENETRATE U SLOW AND HARD ARD ARD ARD ARD ARD LIKE A MOTHOFUCKIN BROOMSTICk
    IMA LEAVE U WITH AN ASS ON FIA
    ITS SO SAD THAT U KEEP CALLIN BACK
    I DO NOT RYME AND COULDNT CARE LESS
    CUZ IM A FUCKIN PEST
    LAY LOW LAY LOW OR MY NIGGUZ IN HERE WILL GO MAD ON UR ANAL
    anal LIKE FI FI FO MARIE AND HER LIL LAMBS ALSO LIKED A MOUTHFUL OF SBOMBS MAGICAL JIZZLE
     
  8. Passleoinj

    Passleoinj Banned

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    real talk LOL
    yo sbombs i think i saw you on the 51 bus a while ago
     
  9. ForGiven

    ForGiven Senior Member

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    awww...thats cute, hes an anally ambitious fag. jk lol.
     
  10. SBOMBS

    SBOMBS Elite Member

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    u mean 61>??

    what city u from??

    KES TU REPRESENTE?!?!?!

    VERDUUUNNN
     
  11. "Riot"

    "Riot" Elite Member

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    listen,im feelin weak,but the only thing i do is bite the side of my cheek.
    put me to rest,hope for the best.
    dont ever think your less then me,that will make my interals bleed.
    mental disabilities,your feelin guilty.
    seriously,just kill me. you feel me?
    I know this verse dont flow,but what do i know?
     
    Last edited: Mar 26, 2008
  12. JEDI-MASTER

    JEDI-MASTER Elite Member

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    shit ***** u coming so hard holla at my sis
    u actin like that sum kind of dis
    toy best back down
    i spit u stumble
    nikka ur bites louder in ur bark
    hope u know how to fight
    taake a step up the plate take ya swing and miss
    this about to be a rumble
    im like mahhamond allie float like a butterfly sting like a bee
    knock ya ass sensless, might set u free
    u come at me wit machetes nd swords
    son i drop nukes aks nd 44's
    i rock the mic like a demebnted menice
    u rock wack lines, im the masta u jus an an apprentice
    learn a thing or two
    u called me out
    but yo ill make ya body drop
    my hands liscened has lethal wepons
    take another swing son 2 more nd u threw

    P.S ur jus a punk u lil internet gangsta
     
  13. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    at least he dosent look like a fish
     
  14. "Riot"

    "Riot" Elite Member

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  15. SBOMBS

    SBOMBS Elite Member

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    bump

    jedi master got ofeended....heheh

    internet thuggin $ life bay bay
     
  16. ForGiven

    ForGiven Senior Member

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    we all love jetpack!
     
  17. Passleoinj

    Passleoinj Banned

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    ah tu viens d'verdun , jai du m'tromper foreal
    jai vu un dude ki te ressemblait dans la 51

    jedi-amster

    what the fuck is yo problem
    some people fuck around and you go all crazy
    lemme calm you down

    yo fuck all the shit you saying , youre a dumb bitch
    youre crew probably kicked you out cause you had no skilz
    or snitched , you aint no home boy , you a house boy
    fuckin toy , messin with the big dogs from montreal
    imma show you how it feels to get rammed for real
    your weak ass lines cant come close to mine
    i produce lyrical genocide similar to colombine
    you dont really wanna fuck with me man
    cause once you get too close to the dog
    you going straight to the ground with the backhand
    youse a small punk , talkshittin over the internet
    probably sucked dick while you was young
    only kid daddy didnt protect , youre an clown
    where you comin from , straight battlin cats that are new here
    scared to fight , cause you'd look like a bitch amongst your pairs
    droppin motherfuckin fists on you boxin out your frame
    when im done with your ass nobody's gonna remember your name
    im great , im powerful
    youre weak and pitiful
    your words are so meaningless that i could kill you with one syllable
    you better go back to school and do what you gotta do
    cause next time you open your mouth , imma fuckin kill you
     
  18. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    i dislike passleoinj more though. compared to you, jedi-master is abe lincon an im the black man he freed from slavery
     
  19. Proper

    Proper Elite Member

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    UnConsious needs to come up in the place so he could son you poor bastards with another 96 bars.
     
  20. Passleoinj

    Passleoinj Banned

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    too bad you cant rap