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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by -Wings-, Feb 19, 2013.
made some improvement, figured it'd be worth checking again.
cool stuff vapik youve come along way broge
Thanks mayne. So toy bb or intermediate?
looks cool to me but i think keep it in toy bb for a little while longer. youre like right there tho. try some fine line sharpies or something like gel pens and do some really involved shit. like touch every base and come hard.
Thanks I'll keep working. And how would I go about using a fine line/pen for outlines? I've been using like a regular sharpie then going through and extending some ends of lines with a fine point to make the sharper and clean them up, but it'd be too thin to do the whole outline, so would I just go over the lines again to thicken them up or what?
use your fucking head, you really need to ask how to use a pen?
and dear god keep that shit in the Toy thread…. and out of this thread.
I think its really funny how this thread came out from Wings, i think that was who it was, getting butt hurt cause his shit was whack and no body wanted it in the Inter. Thread. Then made this as if he could throw judgment on who was toy or not and to get an O.K. for him to post there.
Seeing what some people may think.
Freehand marker on canvas last night. Not finished yet, just a progress shot. 'Askid'
Judge me throw us some tips
Well first off the point of this thread is to see if you can post in toy bb, intermediate, or picture gallery. From the looks of it you definitely belong in toy bb. As far as crits, ditch all the colors and shit and just do simple outlines, and get rid of the drips and whatever that little box thing to the right is needs to go.
Some recent, some old. Wack shit. Judge me.
Entire page is toy bb, Askid I could be wrong but the fact that it's illegible to me brings doubts about your structure. Vapik you are getting closer, you should do some battles or exchanges to try different letter combos it will help you develop your flow and how the letters interact.
guys if you know you are really toy don't post here asking for crits, it's not a thread for crits it's here so people who are sort of in the grey area between threads can find out where to post. Look at the posts in the first two pages to see how this thread is meant to be used but with less beef of course.
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Cool cool. I'll see if I can define the structure more when I add some colour.
Pretty nice blackbook art cx
Here's another quick sketch I did the other night.
Tried to define some letter structure a bit more with some colour. Concept is still pretty abstract.
I'm new to the Forum, so I figured I'll post one of my latest pieces to be judged where to post pics in the future,
^^Ace it has a lot of potential but toned down a bit the i A K part is crammed up, and the K is just jacked up
^^^asis that style is sick and the color is smooth
Okay, thanks a lot and yeah I don't like the k either
love that asis. keep killin it.
ace, work on that K. keep at it looking good
Crits? I have color anxiety lol
@Zoup-I see what u were trying to do there but your letters dont support the style you tried to do. Pick one source for your shadow and unless you can make your letters 3D.
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