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Judgement Thread.

Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by -Wings-, Feb 19, 2013.

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  1. "awesome"ONE

    "awesome"ONE Elite Member

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    considering your paint looks red and its on a dumpster, the r is funny it just looks like a typical tag to me i think there is no way to say its toy or not everyone has different ideas
     
  2. fatboislim

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    But is it safe to say, it looks basic. I just need to open my friends eyes cause I know all he does is bite and I'm looking out for him cause he won't take my word, thts why I posted it in a forum
     
  3. bugs-one

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    Gotta say TOY. It has no flow, the R looks like shit, the L sucks and he needs to drop the crown NO CROWN.
    Your friend needs to figure out what letters he's comfortable with and get a name from those letters. Blur is not an easy letter combo.
     
  4. fatboislim

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    Thank you sir. Will pass on the info
     
  5. "awesome"ONE

    "awesome"ONE Elite Member

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    yes "safe to say that is right". Basic isn't bad necessarily though , i think a lot of good writers are basic. As for looking out for your friend, you sure posting his stuff on this forum for crits and feedback is the best idea? No offense to anyone who just posted but a lot of people on here have a knack for ragging on stuff for fun or out of boredom. Half of them have no real credit so to speak either. What I'm trying to say is go ahead and look out for your friend but in a different way because imo posting on here won't do your friend any justice. All people bite at some point or another, the only question is how bad.
     
  6. "awesome"ONE

    "awesome"ONE Elite Member

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    i feel like your tags are as good as you try to make them, i feel his friend is what i call a carefree writer, he doesn't take writing to serious he kind of just lets go and it shows through his work. I feel sometimes like people take it too seriously it must be nice to let loose.
     
  7. "awesome"ONE

    "awesome"ONE Elite Member

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    haha thats funny but i think somewhat true , i think once writers respect you and your work your working your way out of toy but I'm not going to say i know what it means to not be a toy. Im guessing someone who's not toy is someone who is personally respected but their peers, has lots of work in many places, consistent and quality, humble, and has been around for a while maybe idk though
     
  8. fatboislim

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    Constructive Crits people please. ALso I heard theres another "Zen" out there. Not sure how I feel about it. If i wanna change mines or just keep tryna get up
     
  9. "awesome"ONE

    "awesome"ONE Elite Member

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    your n gets way to narrow man at the end no pun intended, the triangle type shape on top of the z is weird.... change it , thats all for now
     
  10. fatboislim

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    Lmao keepn it real n simple bruh I preciate it
     
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  12. D1c3

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    You guys got any advice for me?
     
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  14. Vapid666

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    I can't even tell what that is. an S? this thread is to see if you belong in toy bb, intermediate, or regular bb. you belong in toy
     
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  18. DannyBoi

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    Im toy so give me some tips please
     
  19. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    Straighten out your letters and make the bars proportionate. Also don't connect them, like you did at the bottom, that's one of the biggest toy mistakes. Don't do those dots and use one simply outline, without those yellow lines.
     
  20. mdmone

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    @clintbeastwood try and focus more on letter structure. might sound counter intuitive but your not gonna get a good result from wild style until you go back and focus on coming up with letters that are crazy but still keep true to the letters general shape. try and make sense out of how your letters are forming.

    @dannyboi- i think bugs hit all those nails on the head. bars need cleaning up, that yellow second aura is kinda needless, and the little dot thing can go too. but mainly those bars man get that shit in order.

    @dice- same goes for you that went for dannyboi and clint. step back and focus on legibility first, get your bars clean and uniform before you start trying to bend stuff all up.
     
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