^^^Yeah, still toy. You got a lot of extensions that don't make any sense and the A is hard to make out. Keep practicing though, you're headed in a good path.

 

Could i get some judgings, sorry for dumping all these photos, just
Some stuff over thr past little
While

 

First time working with paint on (kind of) a wall (my backyard lol)

 

@Suburban: Pics 5, 6, 10, 11 and 12 are cool. Those J's with the front hook part apart, ain't feeling that. Is that sketch a male or female?

 

@Zenith: Keep practicing. Also work on putting some kind of style into your letters.

 

Thanks bugs. Are you talking about the J's in the first picture and the one in the 8th picture? I guess the face is suppose to be a guy, looks like a japanese dude or someshit with a hair bun

 

^^^ Yeah the J's in 1, 7 and 8.

You should re-work that sketch a little, make him a little more manly and tougher, warrior lookin'.

 

Was that pic like simple for the letters or can I get more complex?

 

^^^ If you wanna keep doing that simple bubble style then add a few thing, maybe a bar on top of the Z, make the N more visible and add more detail to the E. Try messing with different bomb styles and see what you're more comfortable with.

 

That's the part where I'm not sure what to do.
I wanna be more complex with the letters but I want to keep the legibility.

Any suggestions?

 

Listen here you dont wanna be more complex you want straight legibility it shaves off a year or so off your toy career seriously if only I knew sucks being selftaught
I'd like to add that you dont wanna post in here because this is a judgement thread to see if you are able to post in the intermediate thread.

 

Don't think I've ever really posted into this thread for 'judgement' before.

First piece I did in a while not on a freight.

 

Yo guys, can I get some criticism here? Thanks a lot!

 

Asek1: intermediate
Jerms: intermediate
zenithONE: toy
asis13: toy
areos: toy

 

@ven0m Yeah, I know that but I'm asking for some advice or something

 

So here's the deal, I know this is toy but its my first attempt ever after looking at and taking pictures of writing for years. i finally decided to try it myself for once and ......well it was terrible. my question is if anyone else was this bad or is there no hope? XD also this is the best thread i found if anyone can point me to a better thread id be happy to move this monstrosity there. (disregard the lines at the bottom i was trying to figure out the new can)

 

1st dont shit talk yourself because that paragraph actually made me feel bad for you but your just starting.
2nd practice on paper before paint although some have different advice I reckon paper before wall is good.
and prime that board cause thats partly why some of the paint looked faded, Hey your filling wasnt as bad as most autistic children holding their can sideways type pinhead shit.For example:

 

thanks for the advice, i wass debating wether or not to get a blackbook first but the can won me over

 

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Crits please! (Y)