I noticed you posting in the experienced thread multiple times. Thats a big no no, You are toy from my judgement.
But it does look like you kinda got the idea what graffitis about, it just looks like you are doing it wrong in some aspects.
For example, Less arrows.

 

not my best work

 

@dreams: i've seen a couple that you've knocked out that had a dope unique style to them, i really dig the way you experiment and try something new with each piece. i'd say to just kick it in the toy threads for now, get some crits and advice. and you could def kill the intermed thread in a few months. keep practicing and trying new techniques.
@curlz: that's toy for sure.

 

I like hockey... and I wouldnt mind MEETing you... as long as theres beer involved

 

@arose and wings: Thanks for the feed back. I'm gonna try and concentrate more on my letter structure and less on the arrows and effects. I enjoy trying different styles, but maybe i should also try and stick to one style and get that one style up to scratch?

 

You don't seem like a complete moron and your sketches aren't that half bad when it comes to color. Some of those Es had potential
Just focus on stuff like, Less arrows and nick nacks. People like simple solid letters from toys, then you start to funk out those letters and develop a style.
You cant just jump into a style, its something you gotta work on for years. Even I am still not satisfied with some of my own work!
Try to simplify your stuff till the point that each letter looks fresh in your name, then you can work on the stuff like stars, arrows, extensions, etc...
It comes in time brother and eventually you will figure out a way to make it dope. If you need any tips and stuff shoot me a pm.

Well even so, best work or not this is toy

 

the top one is cool imho. just need to be finish.

 

^And this is why people generally don't listen to you.

 

get outta here fred no one listens to your wack ass

 

Was told to post this up here, so....yeah

 

what you guys think? been fuckin with a new word, this is after a week of playing around.

 

there's a judgement thread?

 

Shit's new hence only 6 pages

You might want a more experienced opinion but given that I post in the inter thread I think I'm good enough to judge if people are inter.

Gnasoe- some parts worry me a little but not enough to keep you out of the inter thread.

YSR- not really sure but for now I'd say you're top end toy

 

ok, so I have left the arrows, extensions, connections, etc......
Wanted to find out what you guys think about my letters?

 

nobody listens to me. you are a prick.

 

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here's another one for ya, probably won't change your opinion though. i'll get there eventually haha

 

ur shadow is off btw

 

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