fuck its rele big :/ uhmm yea i just wanted crits from tha better writers. im 14 and i coughed this 1 up quick

 

its got potential, but work on your line quality, it looks like you were having a fucking seizure while sketching, toy forum for now little man

 

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what about this one?

 

OOOhhhh right. That goer is acctually pretty decent bro, 3d got a little sloppy though.
That mek braydon...you can tell dude whipped that up fairly fast and its still a banger, unbelievable.
And bles dude, not to hate but you probably should practice a bit more before posting here.But on a positive note the letters really arnt bad, just gotta work on nice smooth lines. takes practice but you'll get it...
-Lsss

 

aight thanx man ill go to the intermediate thread i guess :/

 

At work shit. Had a slow day...used a white out pen for the white effects. Not the best to use but i think it works.
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:O. duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuude. that gave me wood

 

Ay Mek, yo shit is played out my niga.

That's my word.

Jk. Raphaels sais look extra tight. Props.

 

this shits down...

 

Way too crazy man!!! "In the Tunnels" HAhaah good shit

 

What did u use for the lightning effect??

 

^^^^^^^^

whiteout pen. jeez didnt anyone tell you that reading comprehension is fundamental

 

^^^lol
the M coulda been better tho imo but everything else is just badass

 

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shitty photo...

 

Lol Yeah I did read it but I was thinking he used it just for the Highlights that are on Rapha.. I don't understand how he faded with the White out pen is what I should of said... My bad lol

 

Needs tweaking, but just flowing along...

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That shit is on fire man!

 

no worries mogan, im just makin fun. lobs lookin good, likin the spade arrows