gesus- your not going to like that im saying this but i like how you didnt push your letters together on the first one, it shows(i thnk) that you are trying different ways to improve then just doing peice after peice. i dont know what the second to last letter on the right is, but i like it. and for your second sketch, it isnt that bad at all. if i was you yhough, i woul have leaft out the eye and face. i dony know what that first letter on the left is, but if it is a B, i think you should have made it a bit bigger. good work though.