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SMOETH Battle

Discussion in 'Old battles' started by zoup, Apr 21, 2015.

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SMOETH Battle

  1. Stoke

    21 vote(s)
    72.4%
  2. Bugs-one

    7 vote(s)
    24.1%
  3. Thundergunn

    0 vote(s)
    0.0%
  4. Zoup

    1 vote(s)
    3.4%
  1. zoup

    zoup Elite Member

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  2. jak24

    jak24 Senior Member

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    I had to go with stoke on this one... solid piece.
     
  3. Dreams_31:6

    Dreams_31:6 Senior Member

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    Stoke gmv! Gotta love that double coloured outline!!!
     
  4. zoup

    zoup Elite Member

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    Bugs gmv. Clear and legible.

    @Stoke fill wise gmv, the S, O, E. letters felt weak, compared to others. was the T upside down? i couldn't see it.
     
  5. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    @Stoke: Diggin' that piece bro. Only issues I see is the S, M and T. The T is hard to see and the S and M flow could have been a little better.

    @Thundergunn: Not sure what to say. Keep practicing though.

    @Zoup: Keep at it bro. You're getting that flow little by little.

    My vote goes to Stoke.
     
  6. Arose.One

    Arose.One Elite Member

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  7. stoke.

    stoke. Senior Member

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    Thanks for the crits, dudes! These helps a lot. I usually have some real struggle with the T lol. I didnt ve notice it was so difficult to read

    @bugs :I think you should try with variable wides in the lines. I dont like that smoeth tag on the top
    @thundergunn: Practice practice practice.The letter structure needs some work.
    @zoup: That one looks better, you can complicate the colors much more. Do a canvas for smooth colors. And i have to say that tag needs some work and its too big for the piece
     
    Last edited: Apr 26, 2015
  8. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    ^^^ I know, I messed the tag. I'm a have to try the variable widths on the outline.
     
  9. Lich

    Lich Senior Member

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  10. Robin Bancs

    Robin Bancs Member

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