Menu

Welcome!

By registering with us, you'll be able to discuss, share and private message with other members of our community.

Tags

Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

Share This Page

  1. renegade185

    renegade185 Senior Member

    • Messages: 97
    • Likes Received: 0
    the letters dont flow. start wit regular old letters, like you learn when your little.
     
  2. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

    • Messages: 2,114
    • Likes Received: 3
    Tesoner
    ai30.tinypic.com_2py10uf.jpg
    One for my friend
    Emak
    ai28.tinypic.com_30s9dnb.jpg

    Crits on either

    Trap
    Simple
    You're trying to makje your letters all great but they're not going to look good till you go back to simples.

    Los
    Looking good first one especially

    Hazmat
    I'm liking that alot
     
    Last edited: May 22, 2008
  3. pepe.teh.prawn

    pepe.teh.prawn Member

    • Messages: 9
    • Likes Received: 0
    i like the second one best also
     
  4. letsgobombin

    letsgobombin Senior Member

    • Messages: 344
    • Likes Received: 1
    yarb-make all your letters the same size, especially your o, same with the emak, i thought it was cmak with a dodgy add on

    trap- write like this ,TRAP, then you can experiment
    sic- you'll change your name eventually, you might not know why yet but you will and stay simple
    is it just me or are loads of toys just posting pics asking for crits then not giving them?
    its like their the kind of writers that show all their mates their wack tag and they dont know what looks good and they're like 'wow,you've got a sick tag, you've got to go spray it'. not a rant, just an observation
     
  5. SiC-22

    SiC-22 Member

    • Messages: 8
    • Likes Received: 0
    Thanks for the advice man.
    And i finally get what you guys are saying by writing with simple letters and then trying stuff out after that.
     
  6. *cept*

    *cept* Senior Member

    • Messages: 411
    • Likes Received: 0
    copy this-> TRAP

    exactly how its shown, dont put any flair on it or anything.
     
  7. SiC-22

    SiC-22 Member

    • Messages: 8
    • Likes Received: 0
    When do i start adding stuff to it then?
     
  8. *cept*

    *cept* Senior Member

    • Messages: 411
    • Likes Received: 0
    not for a while. after writing it just regular, you'll begin to develop your own things... lurk around here a little more. you'll see that a clean nice tag is much more respected than a fuxored one like your rockin now.
     
  9. SiC-22

    SiC-22 Member

    • Messages: 8
    • Likes Received: 0
    Alright thanks man..Im pretty new to doing tags.
    pretty much all before ive been sketching throw ups
     
  10. *cept*

    *cept* Senior Member

    • Messages: 411
    • Likes Received: 0
    word, no worries. heres a good example

    [Broken External Image]:http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/8507/img0252yx1.jpg
    [Broken External Image]:http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/8507/img0252yx1.24b02228e2.jpg[/QUOTE]

    see in this one all the style lies in the structure an flow of the letters, the way they all look the same and just fit together is what makes it good. your tag is just a bunch of jumbled parts thrown together right now. excess shit and random parts that dont flow make for a shitty tag.
    and please dont hit the streets for a while.
    keep it up though man, if you listen to what alot of us say on here and really put in the practice you can get good pretty quick.

    heres another good example for ya
    [Broken External Image]:http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/2657/tag1bs9.jpg
     
  11. SiC-22

    SiC-22 Member

    • Messages: 8
    • Likes Received: 0
    see in this one all the style lies in the structure an flow of the letters, the way they all look the same and just fit together is what makes it good. your tag is just a bunch of jumbled parts thrown together right now. excess shit and random parts that dont flow make for a shitty tag.
    and please dont hit the streets for a while.
    keep it up though man, if you listen to what alot of us say on here and really put in the practice you can get good pretty quick.

    heres another good example for ya
    [Broken External Image]:http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/2657/tag1bs9.jpg[/QUOTE]




    Oh, okay..yeah i guess after looking over mine its pretty much a bunch of shit that doesnt go together.
    thanks though
     
  12. *cept*

    *cept* Senior Member

    • Messages: 411
    • Likes Received: 0



    Oh, okay..yeah i guess after looking over mine its pretty much a bunch of shit that doesnt go together.
    thanks though[/QUOTE]
    no worries man. keep postin up your new shit. and dont take crits too hard.:D
     
  13. SiC-22

    SiC-22 Member

    • Messages: 8
    • Likes Received: 0
    Yarbles- The Emak I like. I think it would look cooler with a different E maybe?

    Is this more simple?
    ai30.tinypic.com_2mdpj74.jpg
    Should i keep working with stuff like this and move on from here?
     
  14. *cept*

    *cept* Senior Member

    • Messages: 411
    • Likes Received: 0
    fuck yeah, absolutely. move the p back just a little, and make the loop of the P and R look the same. and keep praticing with that to make it even smoother
     
  15. AdRe*

    AdRe* Senior Member

    • Messages: 67
    • Likes Received: 0
  16. Los

    Los Member

    • Messages: 44
    • Likes Received: 0
    Your A looks a bit messed up :S
    Try and close it?
     
  17. *cept*

    *cept* Senior Member

    • Messages: 411
    • Likes Received: 0
    and make it a bit smaller
     
  18. Kinzone

    Kinzone New Member

    • Messages: 3
    • Likes Received: 0
  19. kinglerxst

    kinglerxst Senior Member

    • Messages: 80
    • Likes Received: 0
    ok honest/constructive critisism (dont just say YOU SUCK) how could i improve it

    it says LOKI

    ai293.photobucket.com_albums_mm45_loki2759_DSC00635.jpg
     
  20. kinglerxst

    kinglerxst Senior Member

    • Messages: 80
    • Likes Received: 0
    P.S. now i took away the halo, it is much cleaner and I added 3 vertical lines in the deadspace after the I