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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. braxtons a g

    braxtons a g Senior Member

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    busr-LOL.. keep practicing.. my shit looks gang related so i cant really say much..
    jers-sexyyy :]
     
  2. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    what the fuck do you think graff is?

    libra, that first one is ill. nice flow to it.
     
  3. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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    busr
    The s looks like a wierd k or a b
    and the r i kinda wierd looking
     
  4. INDEPENDENT

    INDEPENDENT Member

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    good stuff jers
    the j and e are good sizes.

    heres a old tag...love doing simple tags but having dripz
    ai4.photobucket.com_albums_y108_313eminem313_graff_SSPX0223.jpg
     
  5. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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    Lose the arrow
    Or put it somewhere else
    and make the d the same size as the othr letters
    and the dot on the i looks kinda wierd to me
    idk

    It's pretty nice though
     
  6. Volume_one_

    Volume_one_ Senior Member

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    i'd say ditch that curle thing on the side of the O and make the D a little more curvy and for the top of the I i'd say make a cirle instead of a little dot, All this tag needs is some dramatic features
     
  7. Hater-AiD~>

    Hater-AiD~> Elite Member

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  8. shun

    shun Senior Member

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    pretty blurry, but looks decent. i dunno if thats the style your going for, but spreading the letters out just a bit could help.
     
  9. Hater-AiD~>

    Hater-AiD~> Elite Member

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    i just like my letters scrunched together like that..i dunno why
     
  10. AcosOne

    AcosOne Member

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    yeah thats a style you could go for... it just might look a bit flowier when they're not squeezed together... and independant, i kind of like the arrow... it looks quite fresh inside the O, idk... id have to agree with mr. Yarbles on the other things though.
    ok my tag...
    ai32.tinypic.com_25zlatx.jpg

    any crits on this one?
     
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  11. kayotix

    kayotix Member

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  12. Hater-AiD~>

    Hater-AiD~> Elite Member

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  13. (SoS) Flu

    (SoS) Flu Senior Member

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    man that tag is on point man keep at it. there isnt anything i can say bad about it that you can fix.
     
  14. smikoer

    smikoer Senior Member

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    Diso: Keep the D the same size and lose teh long arm off that arrow.
    Joga: through the bad quality it looks ok. better flick?
    Kayo: I like the style you're going for. The two Ks on the left i like.. although work on getting that O to match.
    Acosone: The second O needs a little work.Otherwise, you're definately on the right path. keep practising!

    1:
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  15. AdRe*

    AdRe* Senior Member

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  16. shun

    shun Senior Member

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    lose the halo. you dont have to connect every letter to the next, they CAN connect, but they should still be able to flow without a line connecting them. besides that... work more on your D and E. then you could have a good starting point for a tag
     
  17. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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    ai32.tinypic.com_27wyx5z.jpg
    simple
    ai29.tinypic.com_2igkfg3.jpg
    ai30.tinypic.com_154k29w.jpg
    A bit of steez
    Maek
    Crits?

    damen your m,e,and n are spaced out to much puh them in
    Lose the arrow extension on the n
    If you're going to have a halo make it small not the size of the whole tag

    smik
    They're dope as fuck
    and you're like the only one who gave anyone crits
    Good job :)

    aco
    Looks real nice keep it up
     
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  18. WolfBurrns

    WolfBurrns Senior Member

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    ai54.photobucket.com_albums_g86_wolfburrns_same.jpg

    uhm... am i in the right place..?
     
  19. smikoer

    smikoer Senior Member

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    maek: Thanks for the props. The first one is nice! Would love to see it done in a thick marker. Would be dope. The second one is a little sloppy.. watch the E and K. Also, perhaps lose the underline for now, it's a little distracting.

    same: nice up!! 'nuff said.
     
  20. Nine9

    Nine9 Senior Member

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    Damen - The straight letters style doesn't work too well there, try rounding shit offalittle to make it flownicer.

    Same - Dope spot, tag doesn't look right to me though for some reason.


    Some I did yesterday. Still not perfect, kinda simple but it's getting better. First pic is best IMO, used a fatter cap and thick paint and it came out nice. Gonna use a fat cap all the time in future.

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