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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. Hater-AiD~>

    Hater-AiD~> Elite Member

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    what a waste..you should have bombed that

    *and to nine...what the hell are those lines next to your tag..it looks like a 9 with some random line going through it..imo i would get rid of that..but do what you do
     
  2. Nine9

    Nine9 Senior Member

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    It's coming off the e, into a 9 and underline.
     
  3. shun

    shun Senior Member

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    maek: i like the first one the best. kinda oldschool style.
    nine9: i agree with hater, i see where your going, but if you choose to keep it it will need some workin

    taggage. these are done on a tablet, so the width is obviously a little messed up.
    ai277.photobucket.com_albums_kk47_shunbucket_tag1.jpg

    ai277.photobucket.com_albums_kk47_shunbucket_tag2.jpg

    ai277.photobucket.com_albums_kk47_shunbucket_tag3.jpg
     
  4. WolfBurrns

    WolfBurrns Senior Member

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  5. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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    Alright thanks to everyone who critted me
    I'm gonna keep the top style
    But here's a slightly different one
    ai29.tinypic.com_28uhj0m.jpg
    ai27.tinypic.com_23v14jk.jpg

    shun last ones best, it' got the best flow and the best letters imo
    try and make your u and n a bit bigger

    nine I can see what you're going for
    But the whole 9 at the end needs alot of work if you're going ot keep it
    Other than that though I think it looks pretty nice
     
  6. Tonberry

    Tonberry Senior Member

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    Nine, I like it, I'd just lose the underline thing.

    Uh... I meant to fit the letters more tight and close together but I guess I was thinking otherwise when i did it. Crits, anyway?
    ai164.photobucket.com_albums_u1_NeoGarland_zzzzzzzzz_1.jpg

    Edit: It reads CERS.
     
  7. MessTonic

    MessTonic Senior Member

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    Nine9- Im feeling it, but you need to work on a little bit better of can control. Also i think that tag would look sick as hell flared.
     
  8. Alien invasion

    Alien invasion Member

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  9. smikoer

    smikoer Senior Member

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    SELF BUMP for crits.. Appreciated.


    Bumping that too cause it's awesome.
     
  10. FeTuS

    FeTuS Member

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    Alien...the one in the bottom right... bring the lettering closer together, I think it would flow better


    crits on my tag???
     

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  11. MUSEone

    MUSEone Elite Member

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  12. Nine9

    Nine9 Senior Member

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    ^ I think with a wedge tip pen that might look better. You got a nice little flow with all the letters, but I think it can be tidied up a bit.
     
  13. MUSEone

    MUSEone Elite Member

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    That WAS w. a wedge tip nib...
     
  14. shun

    shun Senior Member

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    any more crits???

    maek: those are sick man, keep it up.

    alien: waaaay too much goin on right now. keep it really simple, and i mean REALLY simple. your style will be better for it in the long run.

    maso: the halo on top of the A looks sloppy to me, and the S and R could use some workin, they dont really flow as well. overall, i thing it looks good, keep at it.
     
  15. MUSEone

    MUSEone Elite Member

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    Sure thing...

    Um....try not making ur tags tall? Idk.
     
  16. FeTuS

    FeTuS Member

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    Shun: on your 2nd tag, you see how the 's' goes into the 'h'... get rid of the crossbar on the 'h', just use the point on your 's'











    ...if that makes ANY sense... it's a miracle...
     
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  17. Kruxos

    Kruxos Senior Member

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    no, dont do that, thats cheesy as shit.
     
  18. FeTuS

    FeTuS Member

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    ok, so what would you suggest? let's see some of your shit.
     
  19. Bazer

    Bazer Moderator

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    that is cheesy.. he's making a tag not a logo...
     
  20. FeTuS

    FeTuS Member

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    ok, great, but where is your input, mouthpiece?