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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. MilkyCanvas

    MilkyCanvas Member

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    Modes: Ditch everything, and start out with nice, simple, rounded off letters. Just casual letters. That's what I did a while back ago, and it worked for me. Just work with it.

    Burnt: I like how you went simple. I just thought that your R was a P, and your T was an L. Maybe it's because I'm really bad at distinguishing letters sometimes. But on the other hand, they are pretty scrunched together. Keep the style, mix it up, practice, and spread 'em out just a little bit more. That's my opinion.

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    It reads Measure. MSR for short. Crits please?
    And yes, the A and R reallllly need work.
     
  2. candykiller

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    Milky: I like it, but like you said, you need work on the 'a', I don't think the 'r' is that bad, overall it's nice.
    Nug: Make the 'n' stand out a little more and your 't' looks like a 5.
    Mode: Work on your...everything.

    Bumping mines -
    (Still needs work. You guys can decide which one is better)
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  3. CT08

    CT08 Senior Member

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    Im diggin the bottom one
     
  4. Laze-

    Laze- Member

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    Yea sweet them Astro
     
  5. jerm_haf

    jerm_haf Senior Member

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    agreed. lose the star (or whatever it is) at the bottom and your set
     
  6. MUSEone

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  7. *SIZE*

    *SIZE* Member

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    simple i know

    Critz?
     

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  8. remos

    remos Senior Member

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    size- make it all the same size and try something different with the e
    also from personal expeience i used an s like that and everyone thought it was a 5
     
  9. MilkyCanvas

    MilkyCanvas Member

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    I personally think that the arrow at the bottom looks great.
    But that's just me.
     
  10. MilkyCanvas

    MilkyCanvas Member

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    Size: Give crits to get crits.
    And trust me man, that is in no way simple.

    What you need to do is actually go simple. Drop the star, the quotes, and whatever that stuff is at the bottom. Just start literally writing out your name in print, then keep working with it until you get something.
    It's what most of us did.
     
  11. MilkyCanvas

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  12. MUSEone

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    Has that same wall shit on it.
     
  13. *SIZE*

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    i just think the s looks empty without anything in it i didn't know what to do with it....im working on another style right now just can't get my letters down..
     
  14. candykiller

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    Size: work on the 'S' and 'E' a little, lose the star, the things at the bottom of the tag need to go, and fix the quote marks so it'd flow better.
    [ n thnx for the critz :) ]
     
  15. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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    Size
    Start over write your letters like you would in school
    No add ons no nothing yet
    Don't even rock an underline.
    Most of the good handstyles in ehre are becuase of their letter structure not because they but a bunch of stars and qouts in it
    Start simple and work from there
     
  16. MilkyCanvas

    MilkyCanvas Member

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    Quite honestly, I'll like this once you dig it Yarbles.
     
  17. rsakens

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  18. rsakens

    rsakens Elite Member

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    fucking helllllllllllllllll
    double post again ! =/
    deleted this one please
     
  19. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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    Milk it's pretty good
    It's a good start, the letter structure is alot how mine started out
    Maybe make the a less of a star and push your letters a little bit closer in

    Keane that's dope
    Keep that up
    I like how your k's and r's have that ninja kick kinda thing going for them
    haha
     
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  20. letsgobombin

    letsgobombin Senior Member

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    i got some of that line marking stuff but mine sprays like a 2 inch wide line, anyway, they're kinda hard to make out and it would look much better if it was a fatter line, your n can sometimes be confusing and so can that bit coming out of the s on the rsa, but otherwise some fresh original tags
    size- give crits to get crits next time but just go simple for now like SIZE
     
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