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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. Shiminator

    Shiminator New Member

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  2. modeswang77

    modeswang77 Member

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  3. $1LENCR

    $1LENCR Member

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    i like the flare on the last letter on the second flick.
    good shit.
    stay up.
     
  4. Keke

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    sker- , yeah start simpler and don't make connections if its not a oneliner
     
  5. Shiminator

    Shiminator New Member

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  6. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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    ai34.tinypic.com_2eoclk2.gif
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    Few from tonight

    You guys need to start giving crits if you expect shit.

    Taste that's some of the freshest shit I've seen in a while
    :)
     
  7. modeswang77

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    yarbles- fresh shit, not diggin the quotes tho, but tht's just me, i also can't read it, but im new and toy as fuck so really, what do i know?
    arrangement of letters and new E
    the R and S are a little fucked up
    fucks the flow at the end
    KERS
    ai344.photobucket.com_albums_p350_modeswang77_KERS.jpg
    RESK
    ai344.photobucket.com_albums_p350_modeswang77_RESK.jpg
    I think RESK flows a bit better
    but once again what do i know
    crits?
     
  8. Shiminator

    Shiminator New Member

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    Resk looks a bit better, but I'm a toy. Anyways, I think if the letters were smaller and pushed together more, they would look better. Just me, though.
     
  9. modeswang77

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    suspek- dope ass gold tag, really diggin that first one
    Taste- sick style
    shim- when you post, put the name up as well, im guessing it's BRAINE? fix on that a and e. the a is just weird, all swirly an shit
     
  10. Wallace

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  11. Mr yarbles

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    AEKZ

    Lasic that's pretty dope keep that up
     
  12. FLSteele16

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  13. Wallace

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    flow, ditch the halo
     
  14. Shiminator

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    Ah, alright. I'll keep practicing.
     
  15. Mr yarbles

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    Cosmic
    Spread your letters out don't let then overlap makes it look really sloppy
    Make your I as big as all the other letters and lose the circle dot on it make the dot a line or something but don' make it into an x that's cheesy
    Lose all the accesories for now. maybe just an underline

    Kers
    It's got alot of potential at this point
    Make the bottoms level or give it an underline to make them appear level
    The resk looks better
    Just keep writing it over and over again and your style wll start to adapt to it
     
  16. commongoals

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  17. Wallace

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    keep writing for a very long time, thats almost normal bad handwriting...
     
  18. Mr yarbles

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    Yeah that looks like some gangshit or something
    No offence
    Your a and o ar the only things that are good in this

    Keep working
    Alot.
     
  19. modeswang77

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    Cosmic- give crits to get crits
    yarbles-thanks, i appreciate it, it's nice to know my shit's comin around
     
  20. modeswang77

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    Lasic- fresh shit mang
    ARKO-uh shit man, make it real simple, almost like regular print. look at your key board and copy the letters how they are on there. just keep writin them over and over and eventually you'll develop some style into them. go thru this site and read all the graff you can and just write write write. read alot of the stuff in the toy forum