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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.
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SKER new word
i like the flare on the last letter on the second flick.
sker- , yeah start simpler and don't make connections if its not a oneliner
Any crit on mine?
Few from tonight
You guys need to start giving crits if you expect shit.
Taste that's some of the freshest shit I've seen in a while
yarbles- fresh shit, not diggin the quotes tho, but tht's just me, i also can't read it, but im new and toy as fuck so really, what do i know?
arrangement of letters and new E
the R and S are a little fucked up
fucks the flow at the end
I think RESK flows a bit better
but once again what do i know
Resk looks a bit better, but I'm a toy. Anyways, I think if the letters were smaller and pushed together more, they would look better. Just me, though.
suspek- dope ass gold tag, really diggin that first one
Taste- sick style
shim- when you post, put the name up as well, im guessing it's BRAINE? fix on that a and e. the a is just weird, all swirly an shit
KERS- get your letters closer together and work on your flow
Mr yarbles- AEK?
Suspek- fresh, top one
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Lasic that's pretty dope keep that up
This is my tag crits welcome.
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flow, ditch the halo
Ah, alright. I'll keep practicing.
Spread your letters out don't let then overlap makes it look really sloppy
Make your I as big as all the other letters and lose the circle dot on it make the dot a line or something but don' make it into an x that's cheesy
Lose all the accesories for now. maybe just an underline
It's got alot of potential at this point
Make the bottoms level or give it an underline to make them appear level
The resk looks better
Just keep writing it over and over again and your style wll start to adapt to it
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keep writing for a very long time, thats almost normal bad handwriting...
Yeah that looks like some gangshit or something
Your a and o ar the only things that are good in this
Cosmic- give crits to get crits
yarbles-thanks, i appreciate it, it's nice to know my shit's comin around
Lasic- fresh shit mang
ARKO-uh shit man, make it real simple, almost like regular print. look at your key board and copy the letters how they are on there. just keep writin them over and over and eventually you'll develop some style into them. go thru this site and read all the graff you can and just write write write. read alot of the stuff in the toy forum
Separate names with a comma.