Lime- make the L longer and that style should look nice not like a Z anymore... View attachment 391389 View attachment 391390 View attachment 391391 View attachment 391392 blah..
oene ur getin better..... but damn dude lol make the picz go up in down not side to side killz the forum
oene- that wouldn't piss me off if i saw it on the street because of its sheer simplicity. nice style, keep at it
lol And don't write tmr either Becuase of people like toomer whatever also don't connect your letters oene it looks nice jsut keep writing it over and over and your stye will grow into it more and get a better marker
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i like it, only thing questionable is the actual letters. the Flairs are good for a first time. try to look at flicks of flares, its the best way to learn them. EDIT: also try and "plan" where your gonna flare your letters once youve got them done.
not bad at all man just straighten up the E and S so they are upright and youve got a pretty good handstyle there.
thx for the input what do you mean by straighten up though? Rotate them counter clockwise is what i think you mean but im not sure?
Yeah that's pretty much it, I see exactly what Klaz is saying, the E almost looks like an M so if you maybe make the top line of the E more horizontal and it'll look better.
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