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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. Flash_One

    Flash_One Elite Member

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  2. Flash_One

    Flash_One Elite Member

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    the middle one is the best of the 3 and lose the bottom one...
     
  3. Thrice

    Thrice Elite Member

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    yarbles-2nd one as well, and make the K left line vertical to keep flow with that A.
    Flash-pretty nice, just do a little cleaning on it and please lose the accessories, way too much.the circle things, arrows, dots, and the last letter extensions kind of kill it. still great job, and keep the underline and quotes.
    game-lose the cursive thing, and make the lines more curved and diagonal so they can fit close together, but lose the C extension and that weird inner vertical bar on the R.
    Make the S flow with it, kind of breaks the tag, but none the less it's great, also make that E a bit smaller. Great stuff keep it up.

    Crits please. yay for photoshop.
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  4. Czar One

    Czar One Senior Member

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  5. Thrice

    Thrice Elite Member

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    Czar-not really sure what to say, it looks great, nice job. Wanna do an xchange?
     
  6. Czar One

    Czar One Senior Member

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    yeah man. you write Ahem right?
     
  7. FLSteele16

    FLSteele16 Senior Member

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    flash one- i like those last two alot but im not feelin the big circle you put in them.
    Czar- everything looks good but the star.
     
  8. Thrice

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  9. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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    Thanks for the crits guys
    trying out some simpler steezes
    Which is better?

    czar it's good but push in all your letters also some of your

    ahem make your e the size of the other letters

    flash try not to get too ahead of yourself
    Drop some of the extensions and add ons
    seperate your f from your l makes it looks like another a
    Work on your a more looks kinda wierd
    and work on your s and h too
    make the one on the same level as the other letters

    Also you guys really need to start giving crits.
     
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  10. smikoer

    smikoer Senior Member

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    dj3hac; maybe rotate the S a little to the left to make it fit?
    FlashOne; nice style, also not diggin the circle
    Yarbles; underline isn't needed on them IMO, also try not to let the start of the E touch its middle part? otherwise, nice

    Drunkwriting was a baaaad idea last night..
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  11. Game Ova 07

    Game Ova 07 Senior Member

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    i aint gunna give crits unless i get them...ive posted 3 flicks and got like 1 crit lol

    koer-i wouldnt recommend marker on brick?...and you needa make it flow a little bit more...looks like it took you mad long to do one handstyle its gotta be quick
     
  12. AdRe*

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    Aeks- the pink one ur A doesnt move with the rest of the letters...I think u got ur E and K down u just have to work on steezzing ur A & S a lil more...I like ur sharp shit ur rounded out stuff is iight
    Koer- Ur marker is a lil streaky...and I agree bad Idea drunkwriting...get rid of your underline and work on str8ing it out....I like ur K start frm there and try differ stylez for the rest of your letters to make it move with the K
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    Critique Please?
     
  13. Mr yarbles

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    Yeah people have been hating on my shit like mad lately though
    So idk even know what the fuck to do.

    Adre you got your letters down really good just make sure everything is on the same level and prportioned you know?
    also I wouldn't write dame

    koer your r is little wierd
     
  14. SiC_one

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    My tag sucks, but I have been messin with it, give me some tips to make it better.
     
  15. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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    Give crits to get crits.
     
  16. RezOner..

    RezOner.. Banned

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    Yarbles just start off with simple simples... as in writing AEKS just like that.
     
  17. AdRe*

    AdRe* Senior Member

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    well its DAMEN
    but why wouldnt u write DAME?
     
  18. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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    I have been?
    People used to tell me it was good but then all the sudden everyone started hating on it?
    Idk
    I'll go simpler.

    Edit:
    Some older stuff
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    What do you guys think about these?
     
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  19. Tokenkaligreens

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    honestly aeks to me your tag never really was that good, and I think once you get a decent handy down you'll regret seeing that crap around your town.
     
  20. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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    yeah you're right
    Idk I just hate when I got two sides tellin me two completely different things
    But I'll go back to simple letters

    Edit again:
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    Simpler
    Any better?

    Edit again haha:
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    Word though thanks for helpin me out guys
     
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