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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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    ai36.tinypic.com_bhngox.jpg \
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    A few hands from last night

    the p in that racism hand is sexy

    zar lose the loop in in the r

    apeks is dope
     
  2. RezOner..

    RezOner.. Banned

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    Kid, stop going out. Draw more. You're not getting it. The ratio of each paper tag to each actual tag should be a billion to one.
     
  3. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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    I have been sketcing alot?
    But whateverI'll keep it to paper

    this is about as simplas I can make it any problems?
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  4. exitus

    exitus Senior Member

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    Crits please
    /\ I like the O looks like a cat eye
     
  5. Thrice

    Thrice Elite Member

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    Zaro-if i were you i'd lose that A. I once started doing that too, but it's bad structure, even for a tag.
     
  6. smiley 13

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    yeah i know im toy and if its too hard to read it says lack. do you gups think i should cut the extension off the k or leave it or what ai291.photobucket.com_albums_ll300_lacks1_lack.jpg
     
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  7. denaaa

    denaaa Senior Member

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    yoo smileyy did you used to write smiley ?? if soo i knoww youuu
     
  8. exitus

    exitus Senior Member

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    ai33.tinypic.com_rvhoap.jpg

    is this better?
     
  9. MilkyCanvas

    MilkyCanvas Member

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    Someone said that I was a major toy.
    And that I should go here. What do you guys think?

    I messed up on the star but that's about it.
    [Broken External Image]:http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y134/historical/DSC01534.jpg

    Aesk, the A and the E look alright, simple just like you wanted it. But I don't like the S and the K. Try and work out each letter individually. Just keep writing your name over and over again until it slowly starts to change. Stay off bombingscience, sit in your room, and grab lots of paper, and whatever you can write with.

    Smiley, same as Aesk. Go simple, and try not to do anything fancy. Lose the extension on the K. By the way, it looks like an R.

    Exitus, same as the other guys/gals. Except, you really need to practice. Alot.
     
  10. Mr yarbles

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    Word finally someone gives me something worthwile, and it's good to see you back milk havn't seen you ina while you've improved alot since last time
    Chane your s it kills the flow of your eltters

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    Anyways I did this acouple days ago
    Probably my last tag post for a while
    any crits?
     
  11. MilkyCanvas

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  12. MilkyCanvas

    MilkyCanvas Member

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    OH FUCK you're Aesk?
    Haha, wasn't paying attention to user names.
    Anyway..the last pic before this one that you posted I didn't like, but this looks like THE shit. It's probably becaues I like thicker markers, and if your tag isn't thick it looks bad to me. I never leave the house with a thin marker. But what you have right here is dope. Fuck what I said earlier. This made the difference. It's like a totally different tag. Flows, nice and thick, curvy..like a woman.
     
  13. Mr yarbles

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    hahahaha yeah I remember that and how you got mad at everyone for telling you to go simple haha
    but whatever that was the past man
    But shit you've improved tons from that keep it up

    and thanks man :)
    Yeah all I got round here is pens to practice with
    :/
    and that marker writes clean as fuck I love it haha
     
  14. Zire

    Zire Senior Member

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    Thanks for trying to help guys but i guess im gonna have to develop my tag on my own, which is probably right anyway coz like 4 people have told me to do different things.i guess if your comfortable with your own tag(it atleast has some flow and looks kinda decent) then its okay to write. And aspek your tag is pretty good.
     
  15. exitus

    exitus Senior Member

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    dude what the fuck, he gets crits and i dont?
    what the fuck do you want me to do
     
  16. Speedy

    Speedy Senior Member

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    Yarbles dope as usual. Just try to make the top of the S bigger and curve more. It almost looks like a fucked up O. No hard feeling though because that's what my S's look like in my actual handwriting at school and shit. I don't know if anyone else has this problem but I'm extremely artistic and my handwriting looks like an 8 year old's. Milky I like all those letters but it doesn't flow. It doesn't look like you tried to write a word. It looks like you tried to write each individual letter by itself right next to each other. Know what I mean?
     
  17. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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    I'll give everyone that I can crits so there's no hard feelings

    Exitus go simple no extensions no nothing work on paper not on the computer and push your letters in closer
    ALso exitus is a hella hard word to write
    I'd think about choosing a differnet name
    a's s's k's r's e's are good letters write out your whole alphabet fit together letters that you like and work fromt here.

    smiley looks like you're trying to hard to make it oneliner and steez it ou stick to simpler type letters
    Actually resize it because I can't read it maybe if I could I'd liek it more haha

    Also thanks speedy, I'm working on them hah
    an yeah my handwriting sucks balls too
     
  18. Zire

    Zire Senior Member

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    There aint much crits you can get mate, untill you actaully have a tag that flows theres no way of improving. try and write your tag quickly( the one you just posted) and you'll see what i mean.
     
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  19. Speedy

    Speedy Senior Member

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    Anytime. I'm gonna try to get some tags up in a day or 2. I take IOU's for crits. hah
     
  20. exitus

    exitus Senior Member

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    oh ok, so how to i improve my flow?