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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. Strate

    Strate Member

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    Here's something I've been working on:

    ai6.photobucket.com_albums_y230_MasterSword999_graf002.jpg

    I'm not too sure what i can do with the L and O in this form. I don't think its bad, but I know I'm far from being able to say that.
     
  2. +Hoodwigga

    +Hoodwigga Senior Member

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    soh? what the fuck is it
    ERASE it doesnt look that bad really. maybe having the exclamation point not so close to the end e would be better
     
  3. Strate

    Strate Member

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    I see what i need to work on now. Its supposed to be soal, but I'm havin problems finding a nice way to fit in the a. That and I cant seem to find what i can do with the L
     
  4. Strate

    Strate Member

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    I'm new to this, but it has good flow, and I'd agree with hoodwigga. maybe just a little more space before the '!'
     
  5. Shiva.

    Shiva. Senior Member

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    erase, hold your can closer to the wall at the bottom, and further away at the top.
    just keep practicing, you'll find out how it works.
     
  6. Nigel

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    Could you crit this please? Tell me how much it sucks and what I should do to it please, thanks.
     

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  7. ThatguywhodrinksTea

    ThatguywhodrinksTea Senior Member

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  8. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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    Oene you've improved alot
    really diggin that kink in the last e keep it up
     
  9. +Hoodwigga

    +Hoodwigga Senior Member

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    im thinking make the kink come up and touch the upper part of the e and make the underline touch the bottom of the tag as well maybe
     
  10. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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  11. Truth.

    Truth. Senior Member

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    yarbles try writing with the can so it makes a horizontal line like this - instead of the way you seem to be doin it like this l

    should get your tags lookin a bit better letters need more work
     
  12. braxtons a g

    braxtons a g Senior Member

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    eack- you gonna have flares down quick.. i still havent mastered that shit
     
  13. lawlcat

    lawlcat Senior Member

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    A bit rough, but just trying a new name out.
    ai39.photobucket.com_albums_e174_trevronious_bn.jpg
     
  14. exitus

    exitus Senior Member

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    what do u guys think of hizo for a name
    it means did in spanish which doesnt make to much sence but still looks cool and has some meaning
     
  15. blunttokes

    blunttokes Elite Member

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    let your hand flow with the marker

    keep in the books for a lot longer before u paint ur tags.
     
  16. whahappen?

    whahappen? Elite Member

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  17. +Hoodwigga

    +Hoodwigga Senior Member

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    dont like the s and maybe some more flair on one of the end rs
     
  18. braxtons a g

    braxtons a g Senior Member

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    crits :]
     

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  19. exitus

    exitus Senior Member

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    no idea what that says
    looks like 242
     
  20. Zire

    Zire Senior Member

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    lawlcat- thats an improvement but i dunno if that names taken or whatver.
    exit-hizo sounds alright but i found it really hard to make a tag flow with i in the middle but i dunno thats just me. you might have more luck. have a go