you should definitely work on making those letters uniform.
being elaborate is the least of your worries
make all your shit the same size, and lose all the silly dots.

 

it wont let me resize them so

any other tips

 

It's been a while since I've been around, sorry everyone work's been insane! 30hrs a week WHILE going to school. I'm surviving though... OBAMA WON!

Here's some stuff I just threw together for an excuse to post. It's mediocre, I'm tired though and about to go to bed.

Obama = Admin of the United States.

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Take VGA pictures, crop it in mspaint.

2 options.

A common mistake with new people is having too many straight letters or a blocky / sharp tag. try softening it up a bit then adding sharps until you are happy with it.

 

***bump***

obama!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!obama!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!obama!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!obama!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!obama!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!obama!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!obama!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

meeks... idk dude, ive been having trouble with making an m, they are just homo to make, mine never look good. yours are alright, i guess keep working on it. the best i would say is the one in like the middle left. id say keep meek and then make another tag to do next to it or below it. i just think its too long to do together.

any crits on my tags. i just made some new ones up now, idk im not really liking them but i have no idea where to go. i kept them simple for the most part, like no extra things on em...

 

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fuser - make it simpler, that 3rd one looks decent

jester - looks good, i dont do many tags so i dont rreally no how to crit them

dj3 - the letters are good, just work on getting them to flow a little better

 

Hope you're not planning on writing sink.

 

bottom bump

 

shpel, i kinda like it. idk about the p or not. to me it seems to be a curvy tag but the p is all pointed, but for some reason it doesnt look too out of place. its right in the middle. try making one with a curved p. Also maybe try to work on different ways for the L, i know theres not much you can do with an L, but try connecting it with the rest of the tag more, it seems too detatched to me.

 

sink, go simple
shapel- digging it

stole your name cause i was bored

 

havent been in this thread for a bit.

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no offense rasek your work is usually gold but those letters are squashed and very un structured on the first one

 

i completely agree, the first one is older and i wasnt as familar with the style as i am now. i find its more of a marker tag. dosent look as good with paint.

 

fix your s and your good to go

 

Rasek- not hating, but looking at your peices, I thought your handstyle would be alot better.

 

if you keep bumping you wont get any crits.

 

The R in the first one is kinda sloppy

 

sloppy ground tag after the bar.
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