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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. WoeInfinite

    WoeInfinite Elite Member

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    thanks big blue...
    im tryin to work on it..
    hows this...
    ai60.photobucket.com_albums_h26_SoopaxVillain_4tallhands.jpg
    yeahh the E looks alot like a B actually...sigh.
     
  2. Masta Blasta

    Masta Blasta New Member

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    Book

    Hey Crits please. its been along time and ive been thinking about getting back into it, Chose the name book, cause im a bookworm. Next is a Throwie. Help is widely accepted.
     

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  3. barbadosone

    barbadosone Member

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  4. Audious

    Audious New Member

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    [Broken External Image]:http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/6106/tagsmuv7.jpg

    Haven't actually started spraying yet, keeping it in the book for now. Any (constructive) criticism would be appreciated. I apologize for the shitty cell pic.

    The caption on the sticker says "Lectori Salutem", or "Greetings Reader" in latin.
     
    Last edited: Nov 21, 2008
  5. jester.onest

    jester.onest Senior Member

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    Audious, you have to down-size it if you want anyone to be able to see it. and about crits- you have to give them to get them.
     
  6. Audious

    Audious New Member

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    That better? Sorry, I have a 24" monitor and just kind of forget sometimes :p

    As far as giving criticism, I just started writing that stuff like... 5 days ago, lol. I'm in no position to be giving criticism.
     
  7. jester.onest

    jester.onest Senior Member

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    Even though you are only new, you can still see something that looks not so good, and if people thing you are wrong, then they can go fuck themselves. :)

    The drawings look good, but start off making them more simple. Letter progression is your friend. :)

    Anyway, welcome to BS.
     
  8. DontBeSAME

    DontBeSAME New Member

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    ai35.tinypic.com_9lek8y.jpg

    ai37.tinypic.com_2i0ufk0.jpg

    what handy should i use?
     
  9. XskeletorX

    XskeletorX Senior Member

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    I like the hand in the first flick Same
     
  10. ober

    ober Member

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    Same:

    I guess the drip is a personal preference but, I'm not big on it.
    The second one, the letter form is pretty wack. The way the letters are overlapped and distorted, they can be misinterpreted.

    ober:

    [Broken External Image]:http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/5803/oberhandqd2.png
     
  11. synps

    synps Senior Member

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    audio- wrong thread post that shit in toy blackbooks
    same- first handys good loose the clouds and the drips
    ober- close the bottom of your o

    red meanstreak and shitty cellphone camera pics that I kept getting in my fingers in:
    ai5.photobucket.com_albums_y180_kennysphotos_hahaha003.jpg
    ai5.photobucket.com_albums_y180_kennysphotos_hahaha002.jpg
     
  12. Ink me

    Ink me Senior Member

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    Hey. Just looking for some advice. My tags in yellow.

    ai35.tinypic.com_dpias9.jpg
     
  13. enlis_one

    enlis_one Member

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    dude i like ur letters nice style juss try to make em a lil thicker and try a few diff filler styles yee digg
     
  14. MëZ ™

    MëZ ™ Member

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  15. ober

    ober Member

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    MeZ, drop the arrows! It has no flow because the letters look so isolated...
     
  16. BigBlueViolence

    BigBlueViolence Elite Member

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    Mez, work less on making letters that look like graffiti,
    and work more on making letters that flow together.

    Ober, I don't really dig it.
    It flows, but you warp some of you letters to get it to flow.
    Try and keep the letters proportionate.
     
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  17. Baron

    Baron Moderator

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    What the hell are you talking about? That piece has neither flow nor structure. This is a tag thread and there isn't even a tag in the picture, let alone a hand style! The kid needs to start back from the basics.
     
  18. Lsd

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  19. Ink me

    Ink me Senior Member

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    Bump
     
  20. BigBlueViolence

    BigBlueViolence Elite Member

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    I think you should lose all of your kinks at shit at the end of your letters.
    Use a seperate stroke for the line in your A.
    The quotations and O dot are unnecessary in my opinion, also.